[fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

[sunflower1343]

Title: Back Where He Belongs

Comments

[yaoi_mania]

Mo~ so sweet.

[sunflower1343]

But sometimes that's a good thing, no? ^___^ Thanks for reading and commenting!

[scorch66]

Aww...Such a sweet fic filled with the right amount of angst and fluff. The only thing I found a bit odd was the abrupt love confession at the end because it seemed as though Aki and Asami just learned of their feelings for each other; I would think that confessing would take a bit more time. But other than that tiny detail, I didn't find the characters OOC. I just hope that the NT arc ends as sweetly as this did. :)

[sunflower1343]

I thought about that, but figured Asami didn't talk, just kept it to himself, which he would. And Akihito's statement was ambiguous in my mind. Did he know what Asami was saying in his head and respond in kind? Or was that sarcasm in response to what Asami actually said, that just happened to coincide with what Asami was thinking? So I figured that left both things IC.

Thank you for reading and thinking about it, and letting me know your thoughts! ^__^

[paranoia_woman]

What a treasure I found tonight. This would even make a perfect chapter for Ayano to use in her manga. Your characterizations are dead on. I thank your muse for giving you the inspiration for this sweet piece and I thank you for sharing it here.

[sunflower1343]

*blush* Thank you. I just kept thinking how worn they would really be after this arc ends, and that in RL they wouldn't be having sex until after food, shower, bandaging and sleep.

Of course, not being RL I'm betting sex occurs within 5 seconds of them being alone together, if Asami even waits for his bodyguards to leave. XDD

[chibi_neko23]

Loved it!^^ Great work as always..XD

That was just.. so sweeeeeet!XD I hope it all comes true. hehehe!

[sunflower1343]

Thanks! I hope it's a sweet ending too. I'm betting the romantic in Yamane-sensei gives us some sugar. XDD

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[zetholass]

That was great!!

I really enjoy the way you write, the way you unroll your stories and the way you always manage to make us feel the true emotions of the characters, making them so real that it is as if you were watching a movie.

I love the phrase, “He fanned the flames a little”, because I think that it is what Asami always do at the end, no matter what happens to Akihito, he always try to keep Aki´s fire on.

It was a beautiful story, thank you for sharing!! ^__^

PS: Asami spanking Fei Long and Arbatov? Now, that would be something, isn’t it? (>__O)

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[sunflower1343]

Thank you for your compliments. *^__^* I like trying to write how they would feel if they were real, so I'm glad you thought they seemed that way.

Asami will always flick his lighter under Aki's ass LOL. That's part of what makes them fun for me.

PS-We need to request a spanking DJ. XDD