[fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

[sunflower1343]

Title: Back Where He Belongs

Comments

[tailor3141]

thanks for writing this!! it was really well done!! i'm super impressed!
i look forward to more from you! thanks again

[sunflower1343]

Thank you. :) I don't post as often anymore, but hopefully you'll like what I post when I do. XDD

That's a nice ending...

[checklost]

I am sure that we all feel the need for some closure on NT story by now. The story is great but I the long in between the chapters are simply annoying. I understand about artist process and its not easy to draw 14 to 18 pages of a manga and I know that it's time consuming and Sensei is doing a spectacular job with the art work, but I just can't help being a sourpuss about the wait.

I really like your ending because like some other people pointed out it shows character depth. This semester I am studying melodrama in film and literature. Your story shows a fine insight into characters emotional state and makes the reader feel for the characters, both Asami's frustration and Akihito's doubt. I feel I am better of leaving it as the clouser I wanted for the NT story, but there could always be more, like a homecoming, etc.

Thanks for writing the ending for me,
Joanna

Re: That's a nice ending...

[sunflower1343]

Thank you. :) Sensei's writing always puts mine to shame though. She chooses such perfect plots. I'm glad this can stand in as a good ending though until hers comes out.

For the other, I like writing them as human. To me, the interesting part is what are they thinking and feeling, to do what they do? It's satisfying to me if I can get that across, so thank you. :)

[orenodake]

Wow. Just wow.

Very nicely written. An in depth conversation of two lovers that is long due.

I lol at the part where Asami, used to the convinience of having speed dial, can't remember his men's number.

[sunflower1343]

Thank you! Asami's frustration echoed mine when I did the same LOL, because I use speed dial so much I'd forgotten the number at work. XD

I hope they do talk honestly. She isn't one for having them communicate that way though, so I'm not really expecting it. But I'm hoping for a little of it. :)

[mssupafan]

*sighs* Yes, I agree. This is how it should end. You've done such a lovely job. If it doesn't end like this or similar, it would be ashame.

BRAVO!! *claps loudly*

[sunflower1343]

Thank you. :) I do want them both to be willing to admit they need each other, so I hope it happens.

[ramble_corner]

*luvs
I think we really need after the cliffhanger that was NT15. ^_^

Love your Asami/Akihito ♥

[sunflower1343]

Thanks. :) She has a way of leaving the story at a point where I just need to keep going with it LOL. I'm glad you like the characters the way I wrote them. To me, watching the two of them try to communicate across the gulf between them is a little painful but sweet when they succeed.