Comments | sunflower1343: [fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

sunflower1343

[fic] VF: Back Where He Belongs

May 14, 2008 20:00

Title: Back Where He Belongs ( Read more... )

takaba, romance, asami

Comments 138

alice_montrose May 15 2008, 05:17:59 UTC

So nice... and moving! *sniffle*

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 10:13:32 UTC

^__^ Thanks. I was getting a little tired of the harsh fics, and the ones that were just all sex. And maybe I'm showing my age, but after a night like they're going through I'd want a whiskey, a shower, and some sleep before a marathon bout with Asami. XDD

(But I was so tempted to write an author note that was all about MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMG! *runs away*)

wana10 May 15 2008, 05:38:09 UTC

maaaan..i starve for these kind of fics...so much depth, so touching, such beautiful way to express emotions. thanks for writing :)

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 10:14:49 UTC

Thanks. :) I was wanting to read a fic like this too so I wrote one. XD That's generally what makes me do it LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

christabel_rose May 15 2008, 05:47:17 UTC

Beautiful! Loved every word, the entire conversation was just perfect.

*melts into a puddle of fluff*

Great job ♥

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 10:15:42 UTC

Thank you. :) I love writing dialogue between them.

carmen_red7 May 15 2008, 07:39:29 UTC

I beg to differ. That was perfect. I love it in every way. So very touching and fitting. I would love to see them in Okinawa, a follow up please? *Puppy eyes*

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 10:17:13 UTC

Thank you. :) Perhaps I'll write it. I started to, as a second chapter, but then scrapped it because it just ended so naturally where it did. But I may continue the other as a sequel.

mcartel May 15 2008, 08:28:31 UTC

You've always been such a wonderful writer. ^_^ And here's another proof of your awesomeness. *sighs in envy* If only all men are like Asami... *snicker* Then again if that happened they'd all be gay and woe is us. *lol* Hhhmmm... now if only I could find a fic where Akihito is wearing the tattoo with pride. Make it so that it reminds him of Asami instead of what transpired for him to get it. Kinda symbolic really. Really amusing to know that two dragons are fighting over him. *wink wink* *nudge nudge* I kinda like the tattoo as you can see. XD Hehehehe....

sunflower1343 May 15 2008, 10:20:16 UTC

Thank you so much. ^__^

I don't know if I could write him keeping the tattoo to be honest. Even if he liked it, it would cause him a lot of trouble in Japan because of the stigma associated with tattoos. And I can't see Asami letting him keep Feilong's mark on him. I can totally see him kidnapping Akihito and having it removed. It will be interesting to see what Sensei does with it. :)