That was fun, and definitely, a very clever story, so I thank you for sharing it with us, and really, I think it would work great for a Halloween fic, so I'm glad you posted it now.
This was a perfect way to have Asami, well in his own way, tell Akihito how he feels about him, since I cannot see him coming out and actually telling the kid that he loves him, so this way, Asami gets to show all of the people close to him how he really feels for them, without having to be all mushy and completely not himself, and I am thrilled you had him do it this way!!
It is nice to see you actually writing again, it has been a long while since you last did a story with these two, and I am sure your other fans are as thrilled as I am to read something from you!! Hopefully, you'll continue writing about these two and it won't be as long, as this last time, before you post another fiction from the Viewfinder series!! \ (•^ u ^•) /
Well, it was certainly bloody enough for Halloween. ^^; I didn't realize how much until I started counting wounds and dead people LOL.
I love writing them. I did three for the fic fest we had in the summer. They're below this on my LJ. Two are AxA and one is Feilong. They're all strange. ^^;
Thanks for reading this Stacey, and I hope you're doing OK. *hugs*
Am always happy to see a sunflower story. Loved it. Offline but managed finally to get Android to work. Glad I did. Thank you. Real life weird right now but not as weird as Asami's waking nightmare. Got to go. Later. Cat
I was hoping the humor wasn't too black in spots. It was a little uncharacteristic for Akihito at one point, but I figured with all they'd gone through he could be forgiven. Thanks for stopping by and reading this. :)
I really wasn't trying to make it bloody, but when someone else said that I started counting bodies and limbs and such and thought "Oh my." I'm thinking I was taking revenge for a bad case of the flu. Well that and since these guys were fake, I could kill them any way I wanted. XD
"Wow!" I love this! Very chilling to the bone too. I was so afraid that the trickster God will win, and Asami will never find Akihito,and thus forever live the nightmare over and over again. Phew! I love this story and Aki's retort.... "What took you so long? I almost died in there!".... when Asami finally shoewd up, warms my heart. Akihito knows how much Asami loves him and will always come to his rescue...or die trying. I am not surprise the trickster took the persona of Mikhail, after all that man is crazy as a fox anyway!
My first draft he did win and Aki ended up dead. I didn't like that at all so, new story. LOL
Mikhail is part fox, I just know it. ;D
I'm glad you liked this. I didn't realize how bloody and creepy it was, and I wasn't sure anyone would stick with it once I started killing all the characters off. I just hope they realized that the guys were acting OOC for a reason, because they weren't real.
Thank you for reading this, and letting me know you did. :)
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This was a perfect way to have Asami, well in his own way, tell Akihito how he feels about him, since I cannot see him coming out and actually telling the kid that he loves him, so this way, Asami gets to show all of the people close to him how he really feels for them, without having to be all mushy and completely not himself, and I am thrilled you had him do it this way!!
It is nice to see you actually writing again, it has been a long while since you last did a story with these two, and I am sure your other fans are as thrilled as I am to read something from you!! Hopefully, you'll continue writing about these two and it won't be as long, as this last time, before you post another fiction from the Viewfinder series!! \ (•^ u ^•) /
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I love writing them. I did three for the fic fest we had in the summer. They're below this on my LJ. Two are AxA and one is Feilong. They're all strange. ^^;
Thanks for reading this Stacey, and I hope you're doing OK. *hugs*
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Offline but managed finally to get Android to work. Glad I did.
Thank you. Real life weird right now but not as weird as
Asami's waking nightmare. Got to go. Later. Cat
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Luv your sense of humor
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Thanks Sunflower for the post Halloween gem!
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Mikhail is part fox, I just know it. ;D
I'm glad you liked this. I didn't realize how bloody and creepy it was, and I wasn't sure anyone would stick with it once I started killing all the characters off. I just hope they realized that the guys were acting OOC for a reason, because they weren't real.
Thank you for reading this, and letting me know you did. :)
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