[Fic] VF: Nightmare

[sunflower1343]

Title: Nightmare

Comments

[max8996]

Curious and funny! I love it! Thank you :)))

[sunflower1343]

It's certain curious LOL. Thanks for reading it and letting me know you liked it!

[zinnia_23]

Wow! A fall down the rabbit hole has never had so much emotion. What are the odds?!

I love how they compliment each other here. Heck even Kei and Suoh were priceless. Now we all have to beware of the Bio enhanced prosthetic limb Asami will be sporting after this.

Thanks so much for sharing.

[sunflower1343]

I was thinking that since Asami is so grounded in reality, to have it stripped in this manner would be pretty emotional for him. Probably the only place he allows himself to cry is in his dreams.

I considered the obvious omake with the super power dildo attachment, but decided everyone else could come to that conclusion on their own. You have done your job well. XDD

Thanks for reading this and taking the time to comment about it. :)

[kajornwan]

Awww Why didn't you tell me the Russian was in this too? I was just checking out what you said you had to rewrite and kinda hit a jackpot. *yay*

"Mikhail, save Feilong. And by all the gods, fuck him."
Yes, by all means, somebody has to already. He's not getting any and the effect is proven to be worse than PMS (ask Asami).

I don't know what you wanted to write the first time, but this has to be just as good if not better. It was so refreshing to see Asami running around like crazy while everyone around him was going nuts except Fei Long which can only happen when a certain writer decides to eat contaminated candy on Halloween(?). Love the parts on Suoh and Kirishima which were very funny. Mikhail is such a great tool for making crazy shit happen. And oh, Asami, my man, the first person you have to kill and should have killed a LONG time ago IS Fei Long. After all this time you still haven't figured that out, huh? XD

Good to see you back writing again. And the red wagging tail was so cute *_*

[sunflower1343]

He wasn't in draft one (no one was but AxA), but he ended up here because, well, tricksters and Mikhail seem to go hand in hand. XD And I can't even hate on him when he's trying to blow up pretty Kuroda. I have Mik on the brain LOL

The first draft had the same struggle to get to Akihito, but instead of Asami facing his own nightmares, he was facing standard nightmares which wouldn't really faze him. It was not effective. So I basically rewrote the entire freaking story in one go. While I'd had no sleep in a couple days and was sicker than a dog. So it came out a little weird. XDD

Next time I'll mention when he shows up. ^__^

[istahire]

"Kirishima, have I told you lately how much I value you?"

"Not in so many words. Though I have charted out things you've said that look suspiciously like compliments."

PURE GOLD! I was taken aback by the gore at first, but I persisted and it turned out to be quite fun and interesting!

Asami losing his hand is horrifying but the fact that he didn't hesitate made it so sweet and showed how much Aki meant to him ♥♥♥♥

Thanks for this unusual story!

[sunflower1343]

Honestly I hate gory movies. I don't know what came over me.

Though yes, with Asami's hand, I wanted to show how very much he loved Takaba without needing to say it.

Thanks for reading this despite my bloody mood! XD

[runa93]

So great to see you writing again! This was great! I sort of thought of Loki the moment I saw Trickster God, haven't gotten over my thor thing soory. :P Loved the absolutely gorgeous conversation between Asami and Akihito. :)

[sunflower1343]

If I wrote Loki I'd try to make him have sex with Asami. *runs like hell*

Their conversation was my favorite part to write. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[runa93]

"If I wrote Loki I'd try to make him have sex with Asami."

Dammit, now I want to see that. XD