[Fic] VF: Nightmare

Nov 02, 2013 19:44

Title: Nightmare ( Read more... )

takaba, kirishima, asami, kuroda

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mtarashidango November 7 2013, 00:27:35 UTC
(/ω・\) Missed this! Stupid work!

For a scardy cat, you sure had me at the edge of my seat with this one *grins* It's so fun to play with the 'bake kitsune' idea - there's so much you can toss in to give your readers a heart attack only to say "ha! fooled you!" in the end XDD You nearly killed my tired brain when I thought you killed Feilong 。゚(゚´Д`゚)゜。

Yay for sudden story inspirations~! I hope there's more to come from you XDD *hugs*

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sunflower1343 November 9 2013, 06:17:02 UTC
It's funny but when I wrote it I didn't think it was that bad, but reading it now I'm thinking it was a wee bit scary and bloody. ^^; Ah well, it's Halloween.

I'd never kill Fei! Well OK I did once in that freaky Aki = Satan story, but other than that...

I'm trying to write a couple more things that are Fei related. Hopefully I can see them through to the end. :) *hugs* Thanks for coming by and reading this when you're so busy.

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ickyickypoopoo November 8 2013, 07:09:45 UTC
Love it! Twisted, gory, but I still like it! Thank you for the story and for sharing. Oh yeah. Red bushy tail Mik was a great ending.

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sunflower1343 November 9 2013, 06:18:12 UTC
I think the beginning scenes scared off a lot of people who ran away, because they didn't get it wasn't real. Ah well. Thank you for finishing it! XDD I'm glad you liked it, as strange as it was.

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orenodake November 8 2013, 16:19:42 UTC
This is one Alice in Wonderland only in more sinister way. And how I bet that Asami is glad that he can get away from the twisted rabbit hole, bodily not intact be damned. Also love how Akihito put his faith into Asami despite being trapped in a coffin.

Your fic tone and theme has dedinitely evolved from earlier fic, but what makes me enjoyed reading your fic always is that your Asami and Akihito is so consistent. I feel that It's just how well resonanted and assertive Asami is to Akihito's inquisitiveness and intuitiveness on your every fics. And If I may say, Asami might be the leading man, but your Akihito is most often the closing of Asami and the happy ending tone.
so, thank you for keep writing wonderful fic of everyone favorite couple on VF verse.

ps. Maybe there will be a sequel where "I have a wife" bites mighty Asami's ass? :p

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jamie310 June 16 2014, 08:51:58 UTC
Loved it :)

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sunflower1343 June 17 2014, 03:43:13 UTC
Thanks! :)

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existinnon June 26 2014, 09:07:05 UTC
Thank you :) I haven't seen My Eccentric Family yet and on the fence about it, but now I'm interested lol.

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