Tokyo Babylon fanfic : Hokuto's Shikifuku

Aug 18, 2008 08:36

Title: Hokuto's Shikifuku
Series: Tokyo Babylon
Characters: Hokuto, Subaru, Lady Sumeragi
Rating: G
Genre: Gen
Notes: ...After several years of editing this fic and still not being 100% happy with it, I'm just going to post it. ^^; Else it'll hang around until I'm old and grey.
Summary: There came a time when Hokuto was no longer worth training.

Hokuto's Shikifuku )

fanfic, tokyo babylon/x

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ruthk August 18 2008, 07:25:17 UTC
Love it. It's so Hokuto with all the subtleties one might miss about her character if not paying attention.

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sunny_aquarium August 19 2008, 07:38:01 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I find Hokuto and her motivations really interesting, so it was fun to write about her.

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mithrigil September 2 2008, 01:19:41 UTC
This is really thoughtful and cute! I love in particular the line about mixing the outfits--it's just so evocative and true about her.

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sunny_aquarium September 3 2008, 05:43:34 UTC
Thanks! I was pleased with that line.

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soleil_et_pluie September 2 2008, 02:08:08 UTC
this was delicious cake, moar please. have you tired S&S? i bet you'd be good. *wink wink*

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sunny_aquarium September 3 2008, 05:44:44 UTC
Thanks. ^^

I have written some S/S, but not much. As time goes on they become more fun to write, though!

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periergeia October 30 2008, 23:43:13 UTC
This is great! It's completely in character and manages to portray nuance without being heavy-handed about it.

...it's very weird to read and enjoy non S/S TB/X fics. Very weird. ^^;;

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sunny_aquarium October 31 2008, 13:30:13 UTC
Thanks. I adore Hokuto, so I really wanted to keep her in character.

It's weird? XD Then I'm extra pleased you liked this story! S/S is my favourite thing about TB/X, but I love writing and reading gen fanfics.

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