Convulsions (2/2)

[sunnybopeep]

Title: Convulsions (part 2 of 2)
Genre: AU, romance, angst
Pairing: Sehun/Luhan
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sehun can't bear to see Luhan hurting anymore.
A/N: Because there are enough fluffy, perfect, painless smut fics out there, but, in reality, it isn't always a walk in the park.

Comments

[miawee7]

SPOT!

-edit-

wow.
i would do my fangirl gushing but i can't.
you ended it happily? noooooooooooo lol but still this was really friggin good sunah...like really really good.
it was needy, to say the least.
luhan a wreck, sehun a wreck, this was perfect.
the perfect toxic mix of desperation and hopelessness...with a faint trace of a need, a longing...
well then, this is def worth reading again.

is my pocket roomy enough/ i think you deserve an upgrade! to my purse! yaaaay!

[sunnybopeep]

I'm sorry.. I just couldn't tear them apart!
The thunderstorm stopped, so I took it as a sign that they should stay together.
Maybe next time~ I kind of like writing angst...

That was such an in-depth analysis, and I am so flattered that you thought it was good enough to read a second time.
I'm also flattered that you're upgrading me to your purse!
YAY! n____n

[envybleedsgreen]

SPOT.

[envybleedsgreen]

SUNAH~ THIS IS JUST <333 YOU FIXED THEM. /SOBS.

For a moment I was scared that Yi Xing and Lu Han would get together, but I held faith since you promised me a happy ending. :3

THEY'RE TRYING AGAIN. /CRIES.

[sunnybopeep]

Of course I did, I wouldn't do that to yooouuuuuuu~
❤
I love Yixing and he and Luhan are just SO close... He had to be there to keep Lu companyyyyy!
I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU'RE HAPPY AGAIN.

[envybleedsgreen]

<333

BROTP. ;D Yay~

[rhino792]

you don't even understand how much i love you right now <3 lol XDD
this was great, all the angst and ughhh
i can't even write a proper comment to explain how great this was~
i'm sorry for ruining the comment section ;A;
i loved this though lol :D

[sunnybopeep]

Aw it's okay!
Your comment is so cute, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I lab yu tuuu ~♡

[sendandreceive]

ugh i loved this (i have a weird sadistic thing for messy angst).
the way you painted the fear luhan had, im not even sure fear is the right word but just that crippling feeling, it worked so well and honestly, in my head, luhan is broken as hell so this kind of scenario for him is just perfect to me. ramble ramble
also, i love the layhan bff-ery <3 ultimate friendship otp

[sunnybopeep]

I started off trying to work on something that I had thought up, but then it started raining and the lightning and thunder messed me up...and this came out.

And I really like the idea of a broken Luhan...it's just a fun (who's the twisted one again?) characterization to me. I kind of have a weird obsession with "desperation" and writing this hit the spot haha.

Omg LayHan bffery is maaaayybee my fav brotp... idk either that or SeKai.
Too many feels.

[sunnybopeep]

Ahh thank you so much!