Fic: O Holy Night

Dec 30, 2006 13:54

O Holy Night (2/4)
By Sunrize83

Rating: GEN, PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Description: Sam knew the truth, and the burden of it was becoming more than he could bear. Dean wasn't the one who should have died.
Author's note: Many thanks to iamstealthyone for beta. This fic was written for spn_christmas combining two prompts: An "It's a Wonderful Life" takeoff where Sam sees ( Read more... )

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pheebs1 December 31 2006, 00:56:20 UTC
Great take on what might have been. The idea that they found their way to hunting anyway, that Sam's questions made John think (very nice touch there) and Dean's outcome... I'm very much enjoying!

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sunrize83 January 2 2007, 05:00:27 UTC
I really debated whether to have John and Dean become hunters anyway. But in the end, something supernatural still took John's son, and eventually his wife, from him. So I figured the motivation would still be there. Thanks so much for the feedback.

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sunrize83 January 2 2007, 05:00:47 UTC
:) Thank you.

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ewanspotter December 31 2006, 11:00:22 UTC
I really don't have any other words but: sqeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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sunrize83 January 2 2007, 05:01:07 UTC
Yay! Squeeeeeeing is good. :)

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ewanspotter January 2 2007, 06:32:58 UTC
Squeeing is good. Very, very good. :D

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unhobbityhobbit December 31 2006, 11:45:31 UTC
I love the image of Dean with his extra-hard outer layer just cracking slightly when John leaves. I don't know, it's like there is still a Dean in there, he's just toughened up so much he's pretty unrecognisable. John, too seems to have lost some of his usual reflection on what he's done and it's all because of Sammy.

Silly Sam, of course you being there made a huge difference.

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sunrize83 January 2 2007, 05:02:04 UTC
Poor Sammy just needs a reminder of his worth. :) I'm glad you liked that image of Dean. I could clearly see him putting on a tough front, then cracking when John was gone. Thanks so much for the feedback.

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cloex_brosluvr January 1 2007, 01:22:46 UTC
Loved the update!

"You grounded him, Sammy."
This is so true!

Can't wait for the rest.

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sunrize83 January 2 2007, 05:02:57 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad that rings true for you. More of this tomorrow.

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