Comments | sunstar77: Fic: Timelines and All That 1/1 NC-17

sunstar77

Fic: Timelines and All That 1/1 NC-17

Aug 28, 2007 22:31

Title: Timelines and All That
Pairing: Jack/Rose
Rating: NC-17
Spoliers: Through the end of series three of DW
Summary: "I went back to her estate, in the 90s. Just once or twice. Watched her grow up. Never said hello, timelines and all that." What if Jack lied to the Doctor when he said that during "Utopia"? What if he did say hello, just once ( Read more... )

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Comments 22

mustang_bex1126 August 29 2007, 06:16:20 UTC

Awe... I hate when really hot smut makes me sad too...

Shit, who am I kidding- I love when really hot smut makes me sad. Bravissamo!

sunstar77 August 29 2007, 17:18:34 UTC

Lol, thanks.

ninefifteen August 29 2007, 08:06:06 UTC

This was lovely. I really like this pairing ♥

sunstar77 August 29 2007, 17:19:59 UTC

Thanks. I think Jack and Rose would have been so sweet together. I wish they had had more time together on the show.

ninefifteen August 29 2007, 18:05:32 UTC

Agreed. Yous should definitely write more :)

sunstar77 August 29 2007, 22:34:53 UTC

I have written an ongoing series of stories involving Jack/Rose/Ianto that you can find on my LJ. :-)

burntcopper August 29 2007, 12:47:12 UTC

...there really needs to be more of this kind of pre-doctor Rose, slow-path Jack fic. Waaay too good.

sunstar77 August 29 2007, 17:20:18 UTC

Thank you.

un_sedentary August 29 2007, 17:32:28 UTC

Aww. I loved it. So well done. I love the idea of Jack conveniently forgetting to let the Doctor know about this. *g*

Their meeting (and the hotel scene) is just lovely.

Makes me sad for Jack, though. :(

sunstar77 August 29 2007, 22:32:07 UTC

Thank you.

wendymr August 30 2007, 00:20:27 UTC

I loved the meeting, Jack risking history to talk to her and dance with her... sweet. And the sex was lovely too :)

The only jarring note is Rose waking up alone, feeling groggy, with that note - in her position, I'd have expected the immediate conclusion to be that she was drugged for sex. She only has vague memories of the man, doesn't remember what happened to her, she's in bed naked and alone and she's had sex. Wouldn't the natural conclusion be that she was slipped something like the so-called date-rape drug? So that bothers me :( Not that I know how else you could have ended it, because Jack couldn't have her remember.

You write a lovely Rose and Jack, though.

sunstar77 August 30 2007, 01:00:54 UTC

I'd have expected the immediate conclusion to be that she was drugged for sex.

You're right and I didn't think about that. I'm not sure how I would change it though, for the same reasons you point out.

I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it though. Thanks for reading and commenting.