Fic: Timelines and All That - NEW ENDING, NC-17

Mar 31, 2008 20:06

Title: Timelines and All That
Pairing: Jack/Rose
Rating: NC-17
Summary: "I went back to her estate, in the 90s. Just once or twice. Watched her grow up. Never said hello, timelines and all that." What if Jack lied to the Doctor when he said that? What if he did say hello, just once?
Author's Notes: Betaed by the fabulous lon_dubhDisclaimer: I don't own ( Read more... )

jack, fic: doctor who, rose, fic: crossover, fic: torchwood

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pikkuinen666 April 1 2008, 00:28:21 UTC
aaaawwww fantastic story like this version just as much as the other! I am looking forward to more Jack/Rose fics from you!^^

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sunstar77 April 1 2008, 00:30:26 UTC
Thanks very much!

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the_arc5 April 1 2008, 03:17:20 UTC
Icon love!!!

And story love, too. You did such a great job of capturing the young Rose and Jack together. Beautiful, beautiful.

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sunstar77 April 1 2008, 23:21:51 UTC
Thank you.

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secbeth April 1 2008, 01:31:56 UTC
That was sweet!

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sunstar77 April 1 2008, 01:41:25 UTC
Thank you!

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un_sedentary April 1 2008, 05:04:04 UTC
I remember this story from when you first posted it, and I loved it then, but I love it even more with the new ending! Works much better. And the sweet goodbye is a great bonus. :))

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sunstar77 April 1 2008, 23:22:02 UTC
Thanks!

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dr_is_in April 1 2008, 05:44:21 UTC
I am trying to decide which version I like better......but I do like this one alot.

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sunstar77 April 1 2008, 23:22:19 UTC
Thank you.

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ivy_b April 1 2008, 07:29:51 UTC
This very nearly broke my heart. Poor Jack, I figured he'd have to retcon her later.

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sunstar77 April 1 2008, 23:22:28 UTC
Thanks

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