Fanfiction: I See Red - 06

[supercontenta]

Title: I See Red
Rating: PG-13 for language
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - Yippee!! A new post. I am starting to really love writing this story. Does that make me full of myself? Um...anyway, I LOVE hearing from everyone, and I strongly encourage more responses. Like many before me, I'm a comment whore. I'm going to try and

Comments

[xejanfan]

hahaha! that was awesome! i love the feeling of wonder and delight that they share, and they still tease each other mercilessly, even now! great update, good luck with r/l letting you write more!

[supercontenta]

thanks! love your icon btw. Ye gods, Marian is one sexy lady!

[xejanfan]

thanks! i like to imagine that she's looking at me waiting for her naked in bed! *sigh* yeah, like THAT'll ever happen! pfft. hell, i'd settle for ANY woman to look at me like that! lol! (so would my smut_gremlin!)

[supercontenta]

Wow, that's a nice thing to imagine *sits with a glazed look on face and silly grin*. I'm going to stay in this imaginary world for a while. Maybe it will inspire me to write something for smut_gremlin.

[calleighsgirl]

I'm sorry, I wrote a comment on the last chapter but LJ was hungry and ate it. Then I was pissed and wanted to type it again later, but I forgot.
But basically I just wanted to say that I'm starting to get comfortable with this fic (I apologize for saying something else on an earlier chapter) and I'm glad to hear you love writing it because that sonds like we're gonna get more soon. :D

[supercontenta]

It's ok. I absolutely HATE when I write something and it gets lost to the internet Gods. It makes me not want to rewrite anything and just give up. So I feel your pain.
I'm glad you're getting comfortable with the fic. I worried that people seemed saddened by it, and I'm glad you're sticking it out. I promise our girls will have some fun.

[elisa_trapt]

LOL, our poor girls really can't catch a break, can they?? What will it take?!

I was chuckling to myself throughout this entire chapter, imagining them bickering and basically not being able to get away from each other! Also, big grin for Silvia trying to find Pepa's inner nerd!

And a BIG romantic sigh for Pepa being Silvia's center. LOVE that.

I told you...I'm hopelessly hooked on this fic now...I have no idea where it's going, but I'm now following you like a pony w/ a carrot on a string in front of him. :)

[supercontenta]

Yeah, I hope they have some luck being alone soon. Life (or rather death) is just not fair to them!

I'm glad you're hopelessly hooked on this fic. I am also hooked on writing it. So it works out well.

PS: Don't worry, you'll eventually catch the carrot.

[av8rwinn]

I just caught up reading ALL your Seeing Red and I have to say, VERY creative and I LOVE IT!!. It was worth that hour of joy reading your stuff. MORE MORE MORE

[supercontenta]

Hooray! I am happy you sat and read it all at once. That means you liked, you really really liked it! ;) I'm glad I could bring you a whole hour of joy. Thanks for the comments!

[sia_9]

if you're a comment whore can i be your comment pimp? ok, off to read the story - i'm sure it'll be great as always

[sia_9]

wow i love seeing how your mind works. how do you do it? really unique and creative idea for a story. i wish i could be more unique and creative in my comments! can't wait til the next one thank you so much for your gift to us readers

[supercontenta]

Definitely! You're hired. However, there is currently no benefits package, and the pay isn't all that great either.

Thanks for the kind words. And what are you talking about? Your comment was great - and unique! I hired you didn't I?