Try, Try, Try. [standalone] Part 4

[superhoneymoon]

Title: Try, Try, Try.
Author: superhoneymoon
Rating: PG15, for cursing.
Pairing: Ryden.
POV: 3rd; Brendon-centric, with a section or two of Jon's.
Summary: Brendon's trying not to fall in love. Ryan's trying not to mess up this time. They're all just trying to get somewhere in life without hurting and falling in love along the way and they try, they try so, so

Comments

[panicattheryden]

YOU ARE AMAZING!

I read all of it, and am stunned. I pictured it all in my head as I read it, and wow.
This... so true. Touching.

Seriously... I love this.
And maybe I cried a little at the end.
^_^<3

[superhoneymoon]

Aw! Thank you, lol.

*gives off FC whatever you want xD*

Seriously flattered that you think it really is true, first time writing Ryden and all I could worry about was fucking the characterization up, lol.

*hands tissues*

Thank you so much, sweetie. <3

[dusty_snow]

My god.
I'm speechless, really.
I'm adding you as a friend. Is that okay?

[superhoneymoon]

Thanks for commenting. xD
Wow, is that a good thing or bad thing? ;) kidding.
Of course its okay! :D

[superhoneymoon]

Added you back! ;)

[dusty_snow]

I confess, I read it again and I'll read it over and over and over. Because it's wonderful.

[x_if_i_left_x]

I read the whole thing straight through, even though I'm sick, and I'm in love with it.

This was beautiful. Forget Ryan Ross, you know how to break hearts and fix them.

[superhoneymoon]

D:!!! Get better! *hands whatever you need*

Thank you so much. Heh. :>

<33

[xoarianne_ilyxo]

Oh my god. You've got me completely speechless. That was incredible. That made my heart break and mend and break again. But you fixed it at the end. Amazing.

[superhoneymoon]

Yey! Heart is fixed. :)
Thank you so much. You don't know how happy I am to read this (and everyone else's) comment. xD

Thank you again. ;)
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[afterlifecrowd]

this was so fucking genius and beautiful

you did a great job with it (:

[superhoneymoon]

Wow, thanks, I'm really flattered. <3
Thank you for commenting!