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Try, Try, Try. [standalone] Part 4

Nov 09, 2008 09:09

Title: Try, Try, Try.
Author: superhoneymoon
Rating: PG15, for cursing.
Pairing: Ryden.
POV: 3rd; Brendon-centric, with a section or two of Jon's.
Summary: Brendon's trying not to fall in love. Ryan's trying not to mess up this time. They're all just trying to get somewhere in life without hurting and falling in love along the way and they try, they try so, so ( Read more... )

patd, trytrytry, ryden, fanfiction

Comments 37

jellybean203 November 11 2008, 05:53:06 UTC

Oh my gosh. This is definitely one of my favorites. I love how it all just comes back around, full circle. *mems*

level27chick04 November 11 2008, 06:26:19 UTC

i totally agree!

superhoneymoon November 11 2008, 11:51:55 UTC

Thanks for agreeing (heh) and the comment. xD
<3333

superhoneymoon November 11 2008, 11:51:22 UTC

Aw! Thank you! :D
It was supposed to have a sad ending, but it hurt to hurt them. *snuggles bden&&ryro*

OMG. Mems? Are you kidding me? Wow. Thank you! <33

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superhoneymoon November 11 2008, 11:52:40 UTC

Aw. Thank you so much!
I appreciate it(the comment, i mean, lol). :D
<333

moony_21 November 11 2008, 13:28:19 UTC

oh lord. this is so beautiful!!! my eyes are stinging now... god. i really am... so speechless! i'm so sorry, but for lack of other words, i'd say this is pretty perfect. i loved everything. everything. you dive deep, then float about with your words, then... you fill us up with so many emotions until we couldn't handle it anymore. but then after reading, we found out that you've been catching the emotions overflowing us and filling us up again just right. it makes sense to me, i hope it does to you too.*huggles you so much* =]

superhoneymoon November 11 2008, 13:42:27 UTC

omg. thank you so much! :D:D:D
i really don't know what to say too! lol. *is speechless with you*
i'm glad you enjoyed it, really, I am.
Ryden makes all the sense in the world, true fact.

*huggles back just as tight*
<333

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superhoneymoon November 12 2008, 11:15:50 UTC

Aw, don't cry *hugs* but I'm honestly glad that you think that way! Heh.
Your comment made me smile, thank you. :)

<333

vivisaur November 11 2008, 18:25:51 UTC

This was just too too epic.

I think my heart broke a little in a good way.

A story hasn't made me cry like this in a while.

Great Job.

superhoneymoon November 12 2008, 11:17:02 UTC

Wow, thank you. Heh.
Yay for epic-ness! xD
D=!! Sorry I made you cry. D:

But thank you so so so much. <333