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Try, Try, Try. [standalone] Part 4

Nov 09, 2008 09:09

Title: Try, Try, Try.
Author: superhoneymoon
Rating: PG15, for cursing.
Pairing: Ryden.
POV: 3rd; Brendon-centric, with a section or two of Jon's.
Summary: Brendon's trying not to fall in love. Ryan's trying not to mess up this time. They're all just trying to get somewhere in life without hurting and falling in love along the way and they try, they try so, so ( Read more... )

patd, trytrytry, ryden, fanfiction

Comments 37

born_a_skeleton November 11 2008, 20:06:26 UTC

ohmigod. this was beautiful.

I loved how you used all the four letter words, at the beginning and the end.
and all your language was just amazing. it really conveyed how Brendon was thinking.

:)

superhoneymoon November 12 2008, 11:18:05 UTC

thank you so much!
i'm really really glad you liked it and i'm happy that my language didn't confuse you. xD

*hugs*
thanks! <3

zandraxxzazzy November 12 2008, 02:39:52 UTC

A-W-H-H.
x333
This makes me soooo happy.
In a weird, bipolar way.
._.
But yeah...
*mems*
<33

superhoneymoon November 12 2008, 11:21:45 UTC

hahah. wow.
yay for weird, bipolar happiness xD
omg. mems, aw, you're too kind. you've made me all giggly now. 8D

Thank you so so much! <3

zandraxxzazzy November 14 2008, 23:26:09 UTC

xD
all amazing patdffs go in mah mems.
plus. this was so cute.
x333

superhoneymoon November 15 2008, 07:58:28 UTC

thank you so much hun <3

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superhoneymoon November 14 2008, 11:05:00 UTC

I's so glad you liked it, hun. <33
Thank you so so much! :D:D

karluvmost November 14 2008, 00:14:28 UTC

this is truly great! the four letter thing coming back, the happy ending, I really like it!

superhoneymoon November 14 2008, 11:06:05 UTC

Yey! I'm happy you enjoyed it so much!! :D
Thank you so much for commenting. xD

<333

lethargicpoetic December 7 2008, 06:28:15 UTC

And here it is! Your long overdue comment on how awesome you are for writing this! \:D/

This ttly rawkzz, d00d. Reading it made my heart break. And I teared up in a lot of parts, which usually doesn't happen when I read stuff. (LOL, don't you know it. :P)

Thanks for the dedication, BMed. I appreciate it. Glad you put up with all my criticisms. I know I'm annoyingly overbearing at times. :)) *hugs you*

superhoneymoon December 8 2008, 06:48:55 UTC

Thanks, finally! :P

Really, now? haha. yeah, so many failed attempts on trying to make you cry. lol.

No prob, Mikey. Of course your criticisms are very helpful. And don't be sorry, it's who you are.

I'm glad I dedicated it to you, since you helped me get here. :) *hugs right back*