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7:30 (LATE! FUCK! WIRELESS SUCKS!)

Feb 04, 2007 19:42

7:30

Line Reading
By brooklinegirl
Canadian RPS
Hugh Dillon/Callum Keith Rennie
For superpornsunday!
NC-17
Summary: Hugh's good at the unscripted stuff.

Huge, ginormous thanks to both spacebabe and malnpudl for close, fabulous betas on this!

( Line Reading )

Comments 30

llassah February 5 2007, 01:28:23 UTC

Fuck. Holy fuck. I am so in love with this, because god, the biginning, and Hugh thinking about addiction, and this line-

He wondered if Callum would have sobered up if Hugh had been around.

just killed me- I mean I love you so much for thinking about it, and you got them so well, and made their flaws such a brilliant part of the fic, showing how easy it was to slip into Joe and Billy, and how private Callum is, and how he closes up! And god, this is only the first few paragraphs!

But Hugh making Callum fall apart, that's so fucking hot, the push and pull and powerplay that makes sex scenes so hot? You totally had it all the way through this. And I love how they get on, and the echoing of the film in them rehearsing lines, and god, just wow. Amazing.

brooklinegirl February 7 2007, 15:07:57 UTC

omg, dude. THANK YOU for such awesome feedback - this TOTALLY made my day.

I am so, so pleased that you liked this - I love these boys more than life itself, and I am so happy that you think I captured them here. YAY.

mrsronweasley February 5 2007, 01:33:47 UTC

Oh, Jesus, woman. You fucking KILLED ME, you know that? The passion, the fucking LOVE in this, this THING between them - God, I can't even...wow. Just...wow. There is so much to love here, I don't even know where to start. It's just fucking amazing. And HOT, so so HOT - the kiss up against the wall, Jesus CHRIST. I want to see that. I want to see that so badly.

Hugh breathed it in deep for a moment, then let out his breath slow. "I'm tired of waking up tired, waking up tired, waking up tired," he sang, soft and rough.

*whimpers* Oh God. Dead, dead, dead, I am dead.

No, wait -

Callum shifted against him, settling in, and smoothly joined in with, "…waking up tired, waking up tired." They were quiet for a second, then Callum said, "Touch of Evil."

- yeah, NOW I'm dead.

I fucking love this. And you.

brooklinegirl February 7 2007, 15:09:01 UTC

YAY. oh, honey, YAY, thank you SO MUCH. ♥

I just - I love them SO MUCH, Liz! They are so in love! hugh is SUCH A WOOBIE! and malnpudl TOTALLY gave me the nudge to add that final scene with the lines, so - YAY.

shayheyred February 5 2007, 01:48:02 UTC

Oh, lovely. With beautiful description, which is like, RARE in porn, generally.

brooklinegirl February 7 2007, 15:10:01 UTC

*beams* Yay, thank you! I LOVE them, Shay, a whole damn lot.

kristiinthedark February 5 2007, 01:59:18 UTC

Okay, I've just had this tab open forever, trying to think of eloquent way to tell you how much I adore this and how much I love your writing, and... I adore this. I love your writing. It's hot and wonderful and all kinds of good things. ♥♥♥

brooklinegirl February 7 2007, 15:10:29 UTC

aw, thank you! so much! I am so happy that you like how I write, and just - these BOYS. They KILL me with how in love they are!

akite February 5 2007, 02:25:25 UTC

I love it. Even after the rimming and the sex, they still run lines.

brooklinegirl February 7 2007, 15:10:58 UTC

yay! they are so very in love! and cute! and together! (and hugh REALLY DID need help with his lines.)