Comments | supremegoddess1: LJ Idol: Darkside

supremegoddess1

LJ Idol: Darkside

Apr 25, 2011 19:45

It’s been a long time since we last saw our heroes. Time passes, and life marches on, even for superheroes. It’s harder to fight crime when your arthritis is acting up, let alone the gout ( Read more... )

lj idol, fiction

Comments 35

Caught some needed edits sorchawench April 26 2011, 03:25:28 UTC

Jack's section. 1st paragraph, last sentence. "Guadalupe wasn't working out". You have *worked*.

Jack's section. 3rd paragraph. You typed Ned where I think you meant Jack. 1st, 2nd, 4th sentences.

Re: Caught some needed edits supremegoddess1 April 26 2011, 03:31:39 UTC

Thanks, fixing now.

kellzilla April 26 2011, 08:49:55 UTC

This was really fun, thanks for the read. The other two sections were locked from view, but I liked your "voice" here.

supremegoddess1 April 26 2011, 12:50:19 UTC

They'll be unlocked later; we kept them friends-locked until they're ready to go "live."

tamago23 April 26 2011, 15:58:22 UTC

Heh, this was a clever take on it. Becoming obsolete is rough. Maybe the city should start offering a "Computers 101 for Superheroes" class.

supremegoddess1 April 26 2011, 17:23:22 UTC

I know, right?

comedychick April 27 2011, 07:16:19 UTC

Wow, yeah, some people are really dumb when they think there's a chance of fame & fortune o.O

supremegoddess1 April 27 2011, 12:51:39 UTC

pretty much.

pixiebelle April 27 2011, 18:29:00 UTC

Oh now that was entertaining! How funny!

supremegoddess1 April 27 2011, 23:02:43 UTC

Thank you!