Rodney/Teyla - Zero - PGcinaedNovember 3 2007, 18:53:55 UTC
Rodney's head is always cluttered with thoughts, fighting each other in a furious attempt to get to the front of his mind and demand his attention. Even when he's half-asleep, his mind continues to tick away, turning over various facts or problems.
He's gotten used to it. In fact, perhaps too used to it; it has gotten so that quiet moments unnerve him and he rambles just to push back the eerie thing known as silence.
So when Teyla's lips touch his and all the thoughts and worries that fill up his head vanish for a few seconds, the silence of his own head startles him almost as much as the fact that Teyla is actually kissing him.
He struggles for words, well aware that Teyla is watching him patiently. At last, his thoughts return from wherever they fled, and he says, "Oh. Um." All right, it's not so much a sentence as a fractured exclamation of surprise and wonder, because Teyla wanting him when she could have Ronon or Sheppard or, hell, even Lorne
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Re: Rodney/Teyla - Zero - PGsurreallisNovember 4 2007, 01:21:05 UTC
Oh yes, this works very well. Teyla and Rodney have this quiet sort of bond. He freaks out and she grounds him, and it's just so... wonderful! Well done!
He's gotten used to it. In fact, perhaps too used to it; it has gotten so that quiet moments unnerve him and he rambles just to push back the eerie thing known as silence.
So when Teyla's lips touch his and all the thoughts and worries that fill up his head vanish for a few seconds, the silence of his own head startles him almost as much as the fact that Teyla is actually kissing him.
He struggles for words, well aware that Teyla is watching him patiently. At last, his thoughts return from wherever they fled, and he says, "Oh. Um." All right, it's not so much a sentence as a fractured exclamation of surprise and wonder, because Teyla wanting him when she could have Ronon or Sheppard or, hell, even Lorne ( ... )
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