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FANFIC | Wanting Too Much

Mar 29, 2010 02:29

Title: Wanting Too Much
Characters/Pairings: Susan/Caspian
Rating: PG13 for adult themes
Summary: They both wanted it too much.
Author's Note: Written for casue100; prompt set 50/50, #046 obsession (will be posted there eventually). Movie!PC; AU. Unbeta'd.
Disclaimer: All rights go to CS Lewis, Walden Media, etc.

( They were meticulous in their attention to the details. If their physician told her to drink this, she would. If he told her to be off her feet, was sat all the time. If he said she was go hunt a wild boar, she would've taken up her bow and arrows instantly. )

fanfiction: casue100, rating: pg13, author: kitoky

Comments 10

blackcathollow March 29 2010, 09:57:12 UTC

aww that's so depressing...

kitoky March 29 2010, 14:57:17 UTC

It happens. D: It's so strange coming back to writing with angst though, 'cuz I tend to spit fluff out like crazy.

8D Thanks for reading!

rosegilmore March 30 2010, 01:44:48 UTC

Very depressing, but you wrote it nicely-i enjoyed reading it. :)

kitoky March 31 2010, 00:30:45 UTC

I'm glad! =D And thank you for the kind words!

lockedmonkee March 30 2010, 07:31:41 UTC

Sad but utterly beautiful. (:

kitoky March 31 2010, 00:31:31 UTC

Aww, thank you! :)

la_reine1206 March 30 2010, 13:20:06 UTC

So sad but very well written!!

kitoky March 31 2010, 00:31:44 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! :)

jedimastereowyn April 5 2010, 23:32:23 UTC

Yay, new fic!
But, aww so sad... :( Poor Caspian and Susan, even in the world of fanfiction things are still going wrong for them. Beautifully written though, as always. Do you think you might do a kinda follow up piece? I would love to see how, not only they, but everyone else deals with the aftermath of this...

kitoky April 5 2010, 23:47:39 UTC

Sigh, eventually I'll bring back happy fic! At least, that's what I'll tell myself!

Hmmm, you give an interesting idea, and I might play around with it once I have free time again. Unfortunately school is coming to a close and there are deadlines to catch both in education and financial terms.

Hopefully I can catch a break some time.