Heaven/PG/Jovin

Aug 13, 2008 11:15

Title: Heaven
Rating: PG, just to be safe.
Summary: "The silence in the room dragged on for what seemed to be forever before the younger male said: “Hello, love.” And as he said this, a single tear ran down his face."
Pairing: Jovin
Warnings: Character death
A/N: Sorry about the lack of dialogue :( But I hope you like it anyway! :)

wooee is mee )

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oldincisions August 13 2008, 19:09:11 UTC
omg that was really beautiful and sad :[

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susnemuznae August 13 2008, 23:37:55 UTC
I'm glad you thought it was beautiful, thank you so much :)

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impala_chick August 13 2008, 23:04:51 UTC
Oh, that was gorgeous. I LOVE how everything felt so calm and still and how we were walked through the whole house to get to where the boys where- it made everything feel so beautiful and elegant. And then it got even more intense when we found out what had happened to everyone else. So heart breaking.

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susnemuznae August 13 2008, 23:37:23 UTC
Oh, thank you so so much for that lovely comment. You made my day that much better ♥

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susnemuznae August 13 2008, 23:38:30 UTC
Btw, I'm in love with your icon <33

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brachyura August 14 2008, 04:43:03 UTC
I just started tearing up. This is absolutely beautiful!

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susnemuznae August 14 2008, 05:20:27 UTC
Aww, dear, thank you so much, I'm glad you think that :)

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kaile_the_quiet August 14 2008, 05:06:23 UTC
omg.. I can't believe i'm sitting here crying over a fan fic. lol

This story is so amazing and beautifully written. I love how their afterlife is so simple yet its still everything they could ever want cause all they need is eachother. Its amazing how you took a morbid/sad storyline and made it light, calm and beautiful.

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susnemuznae August 14 2008, 05:23:14 UTC
Aww, don't cry! But I am very glad that you think that about my fic, it makes me haappyy :D Hahaha

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