Fool No More ~One-Shot~

Jan 28, 2011 17:21

Title: Fool No More
Chapters: One-Shot
Genre: Betrayal
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nakajima Yuto x Okamoto Keito; Okamoto Keito x Yaotome Hikaru
Disclaimer: DO NOT OWN! Either the people or the song performed by the group S Club 8.
Summary: Yuto being a little bit jealous of his boyfriend whenever he is around other people starts to believe that maybe his ( Read more... )

hsj: okamoto keito, fanfiction: one-shot, hsj: nakajima yuto, hsj: yaotome hikaru

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phuong_nguyen93 January 29 2011, 03:27:36 UTC
I don't get this o_O'

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suteii January 29 2011, 17:37:00 UTC
Sorry but what don't you get? Please clarify so I can fix it in my writing. Thanks

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phuong_nguyen93 January 29 2011, 17:45:21 UTC
Keito dumped Yuto for Hikaru? What did Yuto write to each member? Is this a sad ending for Yuto?

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suteii January 30 2011, 03:43:51 UTC
Yes Keito dumped Yuto for Hikaru, Yuto's no longer a fool because he figured it out that he was being cheated on. I can't say what Yuto wrote to the two members, because I don't know myself. And no this isn't a sad ending for Yuto.

Does that clear it up?

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aliciaswr January 29 2011, 03:31:48 UTC
Ouch. I didn't expect Keito to do that... T.T

Poor Yuto..

/huggles Yuto

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suteii January 29 2011, 17:37:49 UTC
Yeah but it's not all Keito's fault. It's Hikaru's too! He knew they were together.

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m4rionett3 January 29 2011, 04:22:32 UTC
this fic somehow remind me of westlife-fool again...

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suteii January 29 2011, 17:38:23 UTC
Is that a song? I've never heard of it. *note to self: go look up*

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m4rionett3 January 30 2011, 01:35:25 UTC
yup it ish... when I was in elementary or secondary school if I'm not wrong...

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satommy January 29 2011, 07:42:34 UTC
slight yamajima!
Can I be happy? LOL~
I don't know... I like Hikato but here...
Ahh~~ A interesting oneshot!♥

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suteii January 31 2011, 02:05:02 UTC
Yes you can be happy! I like Hikato too don't get me wrong, I have nothing against any pairing, it just happened to turn out that way.

and thanks

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tetsuha January 29 2011, 15:23:32 UTC
They didn't want to know what he wrote... but I do. X'D

Poor Yuto :(

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suteii January 29 2011, 17:39:15 UTC
I think you can figure that one out eh?

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tetsuha January 29 2011, 17:51:08 UTC
@Hikaru: you took my pretty little boy, bitch!

:P

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