as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away) [part 2/2]

[swabluu]

Title: as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away)
Rating: pg-15
Pairing: sehun/suho, broken!kyungsoo/suho
Length: ~9400 words
Summary: And in the end, Junmyun learns it isn’t only Sehun who needs to learn to let go.

Written for aideshou's fifth challenge ^^
prompts used:  i + ii

Comments

[nara1214]

ヽ(；▽；)ノ
Omg I love it. My feels are going crazy. I just wanna hug u but I will hug my screen bc ur not here lol ❤

[swabluu]

jaksdlfjlakdsjfdas lollol thank you so much ;AAAAAAAAA;

well we can always hug each other by reaching through our screens what xD

[joongshimlover]

This is very beautiful!!! <3
You don't know how happy I was when I saw this 9k wc of a SeHo fic ; v ;

At first, I didn't understand a little about the SuDO part, I think maybe you should put the past part in Italic next time? XD
Hehe I like the stubborn but still very cute Sehun XD and the kiss scenes... OMG it made me sit by myself and smile like crazy! XD
I'm very glad they ended up happy together = v =

Okay~ this made my SeHo feel explode XD But because English doesn't my first language, I can't describe my feel very much .__. Sorry about that T^T
Anw, thank you very much for sharing this <3 Hope you'll write more XD

[swabluu]

thank you so much! <3

oh haha in italics yes i thought of that but i don't like too much italics :/ idk. personal preference i guess ;A; and thank you! ^^

it's okay (: english is a confusing language. it's not my first language either. i understand your frustration ;A; but i get your meaning (:

thank you so much! ^^

[swabluu]

hey (:
unfortunately, I don't allow translations anymore >w< I'm so sorry ): but thank you very much for the offer--I'm really honored ^^ <3

[swabluu]

i can't reply to you're messages because your settings are private T_T
but you haven't been bothering me at all! thank you so much (:

[shanancelice]

First of all, let me show my deep gratitude to u for writing about my biggest love, Seho ( ˘ ³˘)~♡ ... And a good, long one at that, just so happy ;___;, they need more love, really ಥ_ಥ

I can imagine a Suho like that, so caring and wants to protect Sehun's both body and soul. Poor Sehun, lost his important friend while Suho lost his love, but two imperfect souls finally met to make a perfect life together. A happy ending :)

Thank u for sharing, if it's possible, please write more Seho :D

[swabluu]

omg thank you so much <3 and i'm glad i made you happy with the suhun haha :P

yup! i think the only reason why leadermaknae exists in my mind is because suho takes care of sehun ajdlkfjaskljfljasdflasjdf ^^

lol i'll try xD thank you so much! <3

[supa_baek]

OH MY FUCKING GOD BLUU THIS

UGH FINALLY FINISHED THIS

SHIT SHIT SHIT WAIT LET ME COME UP WITH A COHERENT COMMENT

GDI WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY HEART SOB

[swabluu]

SORRY SOBS OKAY WHAT SORRY ;A;

[jlloves]

Hello again my Pokemon buddy! :3
Very much so in like with how you presented everything on this silver platter of yours or was it the work of myungdae either way, I enjoyed it very much so^^

[swabluu]

hello again 8D
aww, thank you so much! ^^ and yes anything godly you read in this story is because of myungdae even if it was me because myungdae is so awesome that all credit goes to him no matter what 8D

[jlloves]

bahaha yours and that other girl(?)'s going to assume she's a girl spam on his wall on aff is pretty funny. i came across his fics>profile when i recognised your swabluu honestly? i dont think there are going to be many other various people whose urls/users are pokemon related lolol and proceeded to die laughing at your cute little mock fights.

your devotion to him is adorable, let jiejie pet you

[swabluu]

hehe oh rivimiera? she's one of my best irl friends lol xD
pokemon are awesome okay i am awesome :D
i'm glad we provided you with amusement 8D

myungdae is my soulmate of course i am devoted ._.

and i do not look attractive at all at 9:30 in the morning but here is my love returned for lay :D