And the Greatest of These... 7/7 (Gen, PG-13)

[swanseajill]

And the Greatest of These...

by Swanseajill

Chapter Seven

7

The irritating buzz at the edge of his consciousness slowly coalesced into the murmur of voices.  Other senses began to kick in, and he became aware that he was half-lying, half-sitting, leaning against something solid but warm.  He could distinguish words, uttered by a voice he knew well, a

Comments

[legoline]

Look, I know in your warped view of reality Sam has more right to live than you do. But I’m telling you, that ain’t true. When will you get it through your thick head that your life is important? It matters whether you live or die. It matters to me, and to all those people whose lives you’ve saved and whose lives you’re gonna save one day. And most of all, it matters to Sam.”

I love your Bobby, and I love you for having him tell Dean all that :)

I really liked this story - I loved how they saved Sam. Very cool plot :)

[swanseajill]

Thanks so much for commenting on each part, and for taking the time to do that. Glad the plot works for you. And Bobby's speech about Dean being important - I'm glad you liked it, because Dean so needs to hear it and I though Bobby was the right person to say it.

Where can I find your story to check it out?

[legoline]

Oh, you're really welcome :)

Dean so needs to hear it and I though Bobby was the right person to say it.

Yup. I think Bobby might be one of the few people who can get through to Dean.

I haven't posted the story yet, it's in the process of being beta'd :)

[hellinabucket93]

Really Amazing story.

I loved that no matter how hurt Dean is, he can push just that little bit more if he needs to keep Sam safe.

It was kind of scary how Sam believed he could control the power while at the same time beating the tar out of Dean. And how Dean covered for him was so sad. He couldn't tell Bobby exactly what happened, It felt kinda like a battered spouse or child. The way they cover and say they "fell Down" instead of the truth.

Your stories are so well written, and they really capture the mind set of both Sam and Dean so well. Thank you for sharing them with us.

[swanseajill]

Thanks for the lovely comments. I think in some ways Sam is scarier in this deluded state than if he was downright evil! Dean as battered spouse or child - interesting. I wonder how much he'd cover for Sam if Sam did choose evil over good?

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

[rupertgsnum1fan]

yay! I really like this story! and even better, I got to read it all in one sitting! I love when I don't have to wait for updates because I get really curious and jumpy and stuff.
and omg, everyone's actions were spot-on. *love*
totally added this to my memories :D

[swanseajill]

I like to read a story all in one sitting too - I have no patience! Glad you enjoyed it and thought everyone's actions were realistic.

[swanseajill]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And I really appreciate the rec at Crack_Impala - I always feel I've made it when I get a rec from you guys!

[swanseajill]

Thanks for the lovely comments, for taking the time to read the story and especially for recc'ing it to your friends - *hugs you back*!