Comments | swanseajill: And the Greatest of These... 7/7 (Gen, PG-13)

swanseajill

And the Greatest of These... 7/7 (Gen, PG-13)

Nov 18, 2007 20:39

And the Greatest of These...

by Swanseajill

Chapter Seven

7

The irritating buzz at the edge of his consciousness slowly coalesced into the murmur of voices. Other senses began to kick in, and he became aware that he was half-lying, half-sitting, leaning against something solid but warm. He could distinguish words, uttered by a voice he knew well, a ( Read more... )

bobby, angst, hurt!dean, dean, supernatural, sam

Comments 33

asher_k December 4 2007, 22:23:19 UTC

Love love LOVE! I have the most bizarre fusion of impatience and short attention span that doesn't get me through a whole lot of chaptered fics, but this was just so perfectly fantastic that I read it all in...well, almost one sitting. One and a half. Anyway everyone's actions and words and all were so spot on, it was completely right.

swanseajill December 4 2007, 22:32:05 UTC

You're so sweet to say such lovely things about the story. I'm so happy you enjoyed it - thanks for both reading and taking the time to comment.

And the Greatest of These... yourlibrarian December 5 2007, 04:15:07 UTC

I really like Bobby's idea of the tattoo as the solution. And it's true that Dean would probably be the only thing to hold Sam back. Sam's indifference and cruelty in the diner was chilling.

Re: And the Greatest of These... swanseajill December 5 2007, 22:35:35 UTC

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you liked the tattoo idea, and that you found Sam's behavior in the diner chilling - that was what I was going for, so it's nice to know that I seem to have succeeded there!

suonguyen December 5 2007, 12:12:08 UTC

This is such an awesome story! I love the lengths Dean would go to to save his brother! The last part where Sam came to himself again was so sweet. Loved this!

swanseajill December 5 2007, 22:36:31 UTC

Thanks so much for such a lovely comment. Cool dark!Sam icon, too!

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swanseajill December 6 2007, 21:56:37 UTC

Thanks for the great review. Glad you liked the plot and evil!Sam.

angieobsessed December 10 2007, 21:10:22 UTC

best story ever! loved it. it was emotional, funny and very interesting. loved it. I hope you write more from time to time. *hands cookies*

swanseajill December 10 2007, 21:54:24 UTC

Wow! Thanks for such a lovely comment. I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much. If you'll excuse shameless self promotion, you can find my other SPN fics in a master list in my journal. Next new story should be up sometime in January.

Thanks for such great encouragement.