Comments | sweet_crazyass: New Fic: "Lines of Communication

sweet_crazyass

New Fic: "Lines of Communication - 1/2"

Aug 23, 2006 15:03

Title: Lines of Communication
Fandom: Lost
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Warnings: Adults only, language and sexual situations.

Note: I DON'T CARE HOW MUCH IT SUCKS I'VE WRITTEN SOMETHING!
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Comments 58

gemjam August 23 2006, 21:47:16 UTC

I loved this, it's so sweet and hot and funny and angsty. I really love this little silent battle of wills that they have going on, both so clearly wanting each other but neither of them willing to give in. But then that drunk email causing Sawyer to give slightly but Jack just takes it too far, can't help it, and Sawyer goes off running again. I just love the rapport they have in those IM conversations, you can tell how well they know each other, even though they're really holding back, and Sawyer teasing Jack is one of my favourite things in the world.

Awesome work, lovey, and I just really love the way you write, you just have a way with words, unlike Jack and Sawyer here ;) Lines like this - Yellow tulips were just as gay but not nearly as hot. - I can't even explain it but just little observations like that, they make it seem more real somehow, I really love stuff like that and you do it so well, those little touches.

Love you. *hugs*

sweet_crazyass August 25 2006, 19:46:16 UTC

Argh!

You've made me cry. But in that good kind of way. :)

Love you and hugs back and thanks.

torncorpse August 23 2006, 22:20:01 UTC

If this is what you write when you don't think you did well, I can't wait to see what you write when you're proud of it!

I thought it was really good. And I loved your Jack characterisation. He's such a little sweetheart.

It's good that the boys are a little unsure of how to go on with the whole 'back in civilisation' thing. Mean's they're both on equal footing.

Jack's dirty little email made me laugh. Of course Sawyer would get at least one of them. ^_^ Silly Jack-O.

Uberness of excitement in the waiting of part two. Can't wait. You did really great with this.

sweet_crazyass August 25 2006, 19:49:33 UTC

Thanks so much! I've had THE worst case of writer's block (the worst to attack me, at any rate) that I'm relieved to have written ANYTHING.

So I especially appreciate your feedback!

*shows the muse your comment in the hope she'll stick around*

strutterms August 23 2006, 22:23:07 UTC

This is GREAT. And a sure cure for what ails you where writer's block is concerned...letting your characters just talk is good stuff, I do it all the time. I laughed my ass off at the office...I MISSED YOU AND YOUR CRACK!FIC LIEKWHOAZ!!!! Please to be posting the part 2 of the fic thing, kthx. :P Heeee...I want to see if Jack ever sends Sawyer those pictures. :P For some reason, I think Jack would be really bad at using Photoshop...don't ask me why.

*runs away giggling*

sweet_crazyass August 25 2006, 19:52:00 UTC

MISSED YOU MORE ZOMG!

THANKS!

*HUGE HUGS OF DOOM*

I bet Jack would C&P all that porn he's been surfing and send that.

strutterms August 25 2006, 20:09:44 UTC

NUH UH I TOTALLY MISSED YOU MORE COZ I SAID SO NEENER NEENER!!! :p *HUGZ BACK*

*giggles* Sawyer would send him more dirty pictures. Flood his email inbox. Who needs spam when you've got Sawyer? :P

sweet_crazyass August 25 2006, 20:41:01 UTC

NO I MISSED YOU MORE DOUBLE QUADRUPLE NEENER NEENER NEENER AND MORE HUGZ THAN EVAR!

Ooooh, I bet Sawyer would send VIDEO, because it's hard to take pictures of actual come shots.

BETTER YET, he'd upload it to YouTube and just send Jack the link, and Jack would die of jealousy at the thought of all the OTHER pervs watching Sawyer get off.

Until YouTube deleted it, of course. :P

misplacedmarble August 23 2006, 22:25:25 UTC

'cooock.'

LOL. Like, literally.

sweet_crazyass August 25 2006, 19:53:38 UTC

*snort*

Poor Jack, I'm always embarrassing the hell out of him.

eponine119 August 23 2006, 22:47:49 UTC

Very nice. Cool idea. Love the Jack's name on Sawyer's dick thing, although I may be twisted because I think marker would have been way more fun than Photoshop in terms of putting it there. :)

sweet_crazyass August 25 2006, 19:58:51 UTC

DUDE! I was SO gonna do the marker thing because I already had a scene written up with Jack waking up with Sawyer's name all over his ass, from that goofy telepathic fic, that I never got around to posting.

Hrrrrrrrrrrm. Perhaps markers will make an appearance in part two.

*shifty eyes*

And thanks for your help with that, you know, thing - the sooper sekrit project is under way.

*hugs*