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Intertwined Fates

Jul 17, 2011 00:49

Title: Intertwined Fates
Pairing: Changmin x Jaejoong (main), Yoochun x Junsu (slight)
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Totally mine. :> Okay, I'm lying. But you believed me for a second, didn't you?
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Oneshot
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, reincarnation (and therefore, character death)

This was inspired by this.

( Some souls get the choice to repeat their lives with their beloved ones again. However, they have to be careful not to make the same mistakes. )

dbsk, rating: pg, genre: angst, character death, genre: romance, jaemin, genre: au, oneshot, yoosu, genre: drama

Comments 20

valzante July 17 2011, 17:10:30 UTC

This is so beautiful ;-; I'm on the verge of crying here ORZ (especially since I read this fic right after the thoughts that inspired it.) Oh Jae... I'll try to be an optimist and hope that he'll get his happiness in the end.

Brb putting this in my memories <3

sweetballads July 17 2011, 20:08:52 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! <3

And hee, that's why it's an open ending after all. I hope Jae got his happy ending as well <3

jaceni July 20 2011, 02:46:42 UTC

AWEEEEE! :((( This was so depressing. I thought it was going to be a chaptered fic, you know, the hope that maybe one day he'd be able to change his mistake, but then I saw the oneshot tag and got even more depress that it's just going to be repeated that way. ;_; Thanks so much for writing it though. It was definitely Angst and I like that genre from time to time. :D I really hope that someday he does make the right decision and that they can finally have a happy ending. ^^ By the way, so Min also decided to repeat his life? Because Jae said yes, but how is it that Min repeats it as well. Does he also chose to repeat his life, and if so, what would happen if Jae says yes and Min says no? Well, thanks for this. Really enjoyed it. ^__^

sweetballads July 22 2011, 11:37:26 UTC

Well, it's an open ending so it's not definitive that this is going to be repetitive. I might write a revised version of this (since I'm quite dissatisfied with some things; but I was too impatient when I posted this lol) but that's still a little bit unsure. I still have three other chaptered fics and I should really finish those //lazy ( ... )

anihimesama July 21 2011, 03:36:19 UTC

Oh God, i can picture it really happenned. You're so good!! @.@

sweetballads July 22 2011, 11:38:07 UTC

Aww, thanks for the compliment! :3 There's still enough room to improve, though, but I'm glad you liked it! <3

iloveboojae January 21 2012, 13:25:06 UTC

Oh my god.
I can't formulate words rn.
All I can do is sit here and sob. Sorry for this ugly comment :(

sweetballads January 22 2012, 21:44:27 UTC

Thank you! <3 Your comment is not ugly at all >:U
It makes me really happy to hear that this fic was able to get to you. ;3 But don't cry, it's just fiction after all~

ashleyjanee January 28 2013, 06:09:13 UTC

I found this whilst looking through old enteries posted to starcandy and I'm extremely surprised that I never read this when you fist posted it, it does seem vaguely familiar though so maybe I did but just didn't comment on it or something - I'm not sure.

But anyway, I really loved this is was so bittersweet and sad and lovely all at the same time, it was beautifully writen and I hope you write more Jaemin in the future because I really like your writing abilities!