Bruised Chapter 7

[sweetballads]

Title: Bruised
Pairing: Yoochun x Junsu, evil!Yunho x Jaejoong (slight)
Rating: R
Disclaimer: They will never be mine unless I manage to find a way to kidnap them and hide them in my closet 8D
Genre: AU, angst, drama, romance
Length: Chaptered
Warnings: Unbeta-ed, violence, abuse

Summary: Junsu's life has been a mess since his parents divorced two

Comments

[burningleaf]

woah. fret not, for i loooove hospital scenes xD his father needs to check into the prison and never come out.

[sweetballads]

Hahaha, that's a relief then! <3

And yeah, writing this chapter was kind of hard because there was so much violence going on and I felt so bad for our little SuSu ;_; but it had to be included because it's important for the story lol.

[ext_1754808]

hi..been reading this word by word n its getting more exciting..but suddenly it stop at chapter 7..may i know if you hv the rest of the chapter? or it just stop here? please show me the other chp if you hv it..really enjoy it..thanks

[ting5]

Reading the last chapter makes me a tiny but hopeful but this, this chapter have me angry, then laughing and now scared and worried for Junsu. What kind of father is that man?! And really YunJae are really horrible here for choosing to be bullies T_T

[sweetballads]

I know! I'm sorry for crushing your hopes like that :c

And I'm also sorry for all the Yunjae shippers roflmao xD At the beginning of the story, I wasn't entirely sure if I should make them evil but if I hadn't, their role would be... almost non-existent. (because I actually fail pretty badly at involving characters other than the important one)

So... yeah. It was pretty hard writing some evil Yunjae parts, though, as I was listening to DBSK's songs while writing and omg... if you listen to that smooth and lovely voice of Jae, it's just so hard to write bad things about him LOL XD

[ting5]

No apology needed, it just means you write very well for me to be feeling those jumble of emotions so quickly.

And I don't mind evil YunJae too much, just them being bullies reminds me of how bad school bullying could be.

I'm looking forward to reading more - see how things will develop ^^

[sweetballads]

Aww, thank you! -giggles-

And yeah, school bullies are really too much. :c They do it because they're insecure about themselves, they want power, etc. But in the end, they'll always end up worse than the one being bullied.

I'll try to update as soon as possible! :D

[mimz_song]

O_________O Junsu better not be dead...or at least make Chun kill YunJae (even though they're my otp, I hate them here) and then himself...and junsu's dad can live and have his guilt eat him up until the day he dies...
*sigh* I hate Junsu's dad...and I fucking hate YunJae here >:[
Fucking bastards...
Love this fic btw <3

[sweetballads]

Lol, I actually don't have an OTP okay I do, Onhyun (SHINee) for the win!! but they're so not popular sobsob ; ; but Yunjae is one of my favorite pairings lol. <3 It was quite hard to write them like this but I fail pretty badly at involving characters other than the main characters. ...so it turned out like this lol.

I'm really glad that you love this fic even though you hate a lot of characters LOL XD (though they deserve the hate o:<)

And lol, the story will go slightly, just slightly, different than what you're hoping for but that's okay. ;p You'll read it in the next update haha!

[sweetballads]

MAYBE HE DID, MAYBE HE DIDN'T! YOU'LL READ MOAR IN THE NEXT CHAPTER LOL!

RANDOM CAPS ABUSE OH YEAHHH 8DDDD

[yesalmen]

omgggggggggggggggggggggg TT

When I read the first paragraphs about how Yoochun tried to protect Junsu and then he was looking for Junsu like crazy I was like "so cute" and when he found him and kissed him I was like "so cute".

But then Junsu went to his house and found his father drunk I thought Junsu run! . I knew his father "change" wouldn't last forever gosh TT.

I can't believe Yunho went as far as make Junsu's father be angry with him because he wanted to make him beat Junsu. TT

And now Junsu's father let him unconscious I only hope he's not dead gosh. And when Junsu was so happy about loving someone and being loved and treasured, everytime something bad has to happen.

Thanks for the update,waiting next^^

[sweetballads]

Yeah, I'm so cruel towards Junsu. D: Lol, I feel bad for crushing everyone's hopes. XD Everyone was hoping so badly that his father would have changed for good lol.

But ah, the latest turn of events are all for the storyline. :>

Thanks for reading! <3