Fic; I Know [Evan Rosier, G]

[sweetbelle07]

Title: I Know
Character(s): Evan Rosier, James Potter
Prompt: draw the line in the sand
Rating: G
Word Count: 206
Author's Notes: Kind of took the liberty that James and Evan were neighbors when they were little. I'd say they are about 8 or 9 in this. All dialogue.

Comments

aw

[seriouslisirius]

poor kids. Confused on why his dad won't let him play with the other children just cause they're different. It's how prejudice starts.

Re: aw

[sweetbelle07]

s'why he becomes a Death Eater ;)

Thanks.

[lunasaurous]

You really captured the little kid voices! And you seem to have a real knack for saying a lot in so few words. I like how you left it up to the imagination as to what went on outside the dialogue, how they said it, etc. Just the things that they said gave a good indication of it, without you even having to tell me anything. It was a good length, too; any longer and it might have become a bit tedious, but it certainly didn't at this length.