Gift for tara1031 (Part 4/4)

Jul 22, 2008 00:05

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eosyn August 9 2008, 06:29:40 UTC
HAVEMERCYYYYYY.

to the author: The first story absolutely broke my heart. Also, I couldn't help laughing at the Persian rug even though I still have holes in my mouth that are being held together my stitches. Amazing!

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owner_of_dooom July 22 2008, 08:29:00 UTC
Gah! Wow! This was like wow! Yay for this fantabulous fictastic story! Sharpay and cleaning products, a match made in hell.

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few July 22 2008, 12:39:57 UTC
Eep! So much to read, so little time before work! This is going to be much shorter than it probably ought to be, because I'm in a rush.

He doesn't mind, really, no different than Taylor wanting to kiss him, so he lets him.

I love that, drunk at least, Chad doesn't see a difference in being kissed by a girl and being kissed by a boy. Go, equality!

Okay, I really don't like Mike's family.

"We met at a baseball game. He won. We were together for a while. That's that."

*wince* Ouch.

She's seen the hat hanging from the pegs above his phone charger.

Wow. That's such an incredibly sad image.

He wishes Ryan would just let him repeat it.

And I'm wondering if he's even tried to. Because I doubt Ryan would stop him.

Chad was so nice. It was still a little surprising to Ryan, thinking about having friends that didn't share the same genetic parentage.

Awww. I adore Ryan.

Sharpay will, once she sees it...only hers will be coated in faux-fur, Ryan thought with a shudder. His poor sister, being out there on her own without his guidance ( ... )

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oncetwiceforevr July 22 2008, 22:47:20 UTC
Ahh! I don't know what to say- this is so much I could've asked for and more! I don't even know where to start really. I loved the different variations, I loved the drunken kiss on the boardwalk, I loved the little graphics at the beginning of each chapter.

It was really interesting the different approaches you took with each of the stories. I'm not quite sure if I liked the more sad, emotional version or the happy!fluffy one! Haha.

Thanks sooo much!

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jalabert July 23 2008, 02:07:57 UTC
I must admit to being confused by elements of each story. But I was nonetheless well entertained, drawn--a bit giddily--through the up and downs and twists and turns of each plot. Likening this pair of stories to a roller coaster ride doesn't seem to do them adequate justice, but the exhilaration of surviving the trip unscathed and ready to rise again does.

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