Week 1, Title: Cybervision

[swirlsofblue]

Cybervision

No more glasses. No more contacts. No more eye exams.

Say goodbye to the expense and hassle with a Cybervision chip. The insertion of which is simple and painless. With Cybervision you will be able to see the world in crisp, high definition as well as having zoom functionality and night-vision which you can control from your phone

Comments

[dmousey]

✌🐀

[swirlsofblue]

Thanks :)

[marlawentmad]

Great ending line. The structure of this laid a solid foundation.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you liked that line :)

[static_abyss]

This was excellent. All the stakes were clearly laid out, so the ending was impactful. Loved it!

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, so glad you found the ending impactful :)

[unmowngrass]

Creepy!

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you :)

[me_sonrei]

It is terrifying how believable this is. Well done.

[swirlsofblue]

Thank you, glad you found it believable :)