A hard man to predict (part one)

[swordsharp]

Title: A hard man to predict
By: Swordsharp
Word count: 4218, by the po'ers!
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Sparrington
Disclaimer: I don't own these people... if I did they'd be caged in my cellar for my own amusement
Summary: Everyone has their own version of how Jack and James got together. This is part one of mine, and my first ever Sparrington fic.

Comments

[rabid_fangrrl]

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Interesting and action packed beginning! Loverly!

I await part dos most eagerly. Maye there be much - tastefully and artfully constructed man-smex....

Or down and dirty man-smex.....

oooorr any kinda man-smex. I'm really not too picky....

(O_o)'

yay!.

[oanja]

Great start for a story! Can't wait to read how things will evolve from here. ^_^

[oo_wings_oo]

I love it!
Love Jack's explanation and when James and he are on top of each other on the roof.
Can't wait to read more,

.:Wings:.

[swordsharp]

Thanks for the compliments especially about characterisation - whenever I have to write Jack's speeches and I get stuck I just stop, stand up and do a little Jack-esque sway and arm gesture... suddenly I know exactly what to write!! Part two shouldn't be too long - I'm off on holiday next week so I want it finished before I go or it'll drive me mad!

Thanks for all your comments ^^

[spiritsshadow]

Much lovely fic here! I can't wait for more~ ^^