drabble: [numb3rs] temptation waits

[sydian]

Title: Temptation Waits
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Warnings: Incest.
Rating/Category: PG-13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None
Summary: No one can resist forever.
Notes: Title nabbed from Garbage. Written for the Resistance challenge at numb3rs100.

Comments

[quixotic___]

Wee, I figured I'd read this once since it was only PG-13. :p I'm so amazed by all of the imagery, yearnings and emotions you could fit into 100 words. I'm thoroughly interested by Don's inner workings in the Don/Charlie universe... he's the big brother, he should be the one to control himself, the one to say 'no'... but he always succumbs to the Charlie loving. It's fascinating, even to someone like me. :p

And wee for a Don/Charlie fic I can actually READ, that doesn't mention a penis. :) Innocence works, sometimes... especially for this fic. Although it definately alludes to all that is hot and steamy, as any good Don/Charlie should (or so I hear *whistles innocently*). :)

Thank you for posting this! I loved it. :D

[sydian]

Thank you, my dear. :) I'm glad this worked for you, even within the limited space of 100 words.

he's the big brother, he should be the one to control himself, the one to say 'no'... but he always succumbs to the Charlie loving

So true! I always picture him as trying to be strong (for both Charlie's sake and his own), but in the end the desire to give Charlie what he wants always wins out. But not without much agonizing on Don's part. ;)

Innocence works

If employed well, I think it has the potential to work even better than full-out seduction and hotness. Charlie is so innocent in so many ways (just take his cluelessness about his work for the NSA in Sacrifice), and that's a large part of his allure.

Thank you for posting this!

And thank you for commenting. I really appreciate it. :)