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What's Unsaid

Aug 01, 2006 08:35

TITLE: Behind the Lines: What's Unsaid
AUTHOR:sydneylover150
PAIRING: House/Wilson strong friendship or pre-slash.
RATING: PG-13 to PG-15 for the f-bomb.
WARNINGS: underlying bitterness, a bit of despair. House’s thoughts in 3rd person point of view. Post-No Reason, thoughts of how season 3 will go.
SUMMARY: Sometimes House wondered why he just did ( Read more... )

house/wilson

Comments 12

anonymous August 2 2006, 01:36:00 UTC

Gosh, this is kinda dark, don't you think? Don't take it wrong, I like it, it is just not the idea I usually see being thrown around. Good job though!!

sydneylover150 August 2 2006, 10:55:25 UTC

*smiles secretively* Yes it could be considered dark, depression is a very dark emotion. I'm still surprised I wrote it. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

sanitylapse August 2 2006, 08:35:48 UTC

I really shouldn't reply to fic this late at night because then all the poster ends up getting is something like, 'this is good'.

Anyway, I like this, and I think there should be more. I also believe 'psychology pain' should be 'psychological pain'.

I further believe that it is past my bedtime.

sydneylover150 August 2 2006, 10:53:10 UTC

Laughs, I'll try. And thanks for the tip, I'll change the psychology pain to psychological pain. *smiles* Thank you for the review. Made me feel happy!

fayding_fast August 2 2006, 16:59:51 UTC

I really enjoyed this and thought it was very sad. As you asked for complete honesty, I felt that the mention of Wilson's mistakes, Grace etc, interrupted the flow of the story just the tiniest bit. Maybe that topic belongs in a different story to this one? *hint, hint* Having said that, this fic is very thoughtful and the last sentence in particular is particularly wonderful. You've really done well. :D

sydneylover150 August 3 2006, 00:50:07 UTC

*laughs* Thanks for the honesty. I'll try and edit the story when I have time. I'll think about another story. Don't worry I am working on one, but it is not related to this one at all.

I'll think about writing one related to this. The question is which person do you want the story from? *smiles* Or do you want the story looking into everyone's head? You tell me and we'll go from there. *laughs*

Thanks again for the review. I'm glad you liked the last line.

fayding_fast August 9 2006, 15:27:54 UTC

I'm so sorry for the delay in replying. Ah, I rhink if you write a companion piece, a story from either Wlson's or Cuddy's viewpoint would be very interesting indeed. You're going to be busy!

reemaria August 3 2006, 17:22:06 UTC

Nice dark tones to the story, I loved it! It really felt like this was part of an episode where you can acually hear House's thought's though.
Any chance of a continuation? I take it that Wilson actually was awake, and hear what House said. I'd love to hear the conversation that follows! :D

sydneylover150 August 3 2006, 17:46:58 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad people liked it, I was beginning to get worried that I did horribly. Thanks for the episode comment. *blushes* I was trying for that.

Yes, to answer your question, Wilson was awake and House did know that. He just didn't admit it to himself. It is easier to talk to a sleeping person that it is to talk to a waking person. I'll try to write a companion or sequel piece. It probably will happen. Thanks again!!

mistressofmagik August 19 2006, 03:57:31 UTC

i liked it! :D