The cake is a lie

Feb 17, 2010 17:58

Title: The cake is a lie
Author: di_elle
Rating: PG-13 (curse and one "f" word)
Challenge:#20 - consequence
Notes/Warning:: Can be considered a complete AU or post season 4 finale . Un-betaed, so any mistakes are mine, sorry

Cursed the day he had taken that power! )

#20 - consequence, by - di_elle, rating - pg13

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di_elle February 17 2010, 19:14:55 UTC
I'm glad you liked that last line, I was unsure about how to end this.

thanks for reading! :)

[edited because apparently lj ate my answer]

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bellonablack February 17 2010, 20:37:28 UTC
Awww....that kind of crushed me. It's a nice tie in to the girl/victim's warning that he'd regret it too.

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di_elle February 18 2010, 11:33:57 UTC
yes because, think about it, everyone lies now and then, must be really an horrible power to have.

Sidenote: the way the writers forgot about it in s4 was so... I don't even know... Nathan!Sylar should had have a "effing concert of bells" goin on in his mind anytime he talked to Angela...

Thanks for reading! ;)

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quirkysmuse February 17 2010, 20:56:41 UTC
Wow, love this take on the prompt. Great last line too. Nice work!

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di_elle February 18 2010, 11:35:21 UTC
I had this take in mind when I decided for this prompt.
Thank you!

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lemomina February 17 2010, 23:07:11 UTC
That last line was a killer !!

Very Well done , i love it

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di_elle February 18 2010, 11:36:25 UTC
-thank you!!! I'm glad you love it .:)

your icon will never stop to amuse me... :D

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stainofmylove February 18 2010, 12:05:36 UTC
Oh, what a great use of the prompt! You covered so much ground in so little words, and it's definitely very sad. Stupid Sylar >:(

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di_elle February 19 2010, 22:49:25 UTC
Thank you!
Well, I have no compassion for Sylar lately, I want to see him suffer. ;)

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