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Diva has left the city.

... If any of you were ever involved with her, or sought to fight her, she is no longer your concern.

[ooc:: Assuming for the sake of sanity that his arm and wing have been repaired-- just message me if this is a problem. :>]

Time... remains to be a burden. Days pass in months, Diva is dead but- In this place. An enemy can be killed, only to return, and that is...

Repetitive.

Shameful. For her, to live with-

... My wounds have healed. It is only a minor hindrance.

... Saya, I am glad you are well. You shouldn't worry.

[Private to Solomon]

... I- Saya is-... I ( Read more... )

[A thunderous roar fills the air, the sound of concrete crashing against the ground--

and then, silence.]

Saya... I will- [His voice, strained, falters for a moment.]

This place. Again. Only now, when- Amshel.

... I can only hope.

[ooc:: Returning at episode 50, just before the bombing at the opera house. Missing his left arm and er, ( Read more... )

I've regained my normal body, normal self, but something has occurred to me... Is this wrong? I should think not. I am always interested in her well-being, and if--

Saya, you have never been more beautiful to me on this day.

[ooc:: No one else comment, please. 8) The brain-break is here, but you all won't get to see until he wakes up~~~]

I, ah... hm. [tinkering noises and finally a CRASH and muffled cursing as the device is, supposedly, dropped. onto his feet. sob.]

That hurt. What is this thing, anyway, I don't- [picks it up and SHAKE SHAKE SHAKE. oh, wait.] Er, hello? Is anyone there?

... Can someone tell me where I am, please. This doesn't make any sense.

... Mister Joel? ( Read more... )

... That curse. Another Saya, and-- It was odd, but things have returned to normal.

Saya is recovering, as well. She will be fine, given time to rest.

... To those that helped her when I could not, thank you.

[the device cuts on abruptly, but for a moment nothing can be heard. unless maybe you focus and listen for the rasping breath of someone in pain, maybe the steady dripping of some heavy liquid. . .]

Saya is--

I can't heal her. Someone--

... She has friends here, I know this. Someone here can heal her. She can't die here.

[ooc:: 8| Diva is a ( Read more... )

A part-time job is tedious, at best, but I've found having marginal funding is better than none at all. Therefor, if anyone is interested in learning to play the cello, simply contact me through said device.

...

... Exams are tomorrow. You should all do your best to use the remaining time to study. That includes you, Saya.I, of course, am well- ( Read more... )

Ah...



[ooc:: So cursed. So, very cursed. Cursed enough that this was all reenacted on video for you to see and laugh at. They will also be replying to any comments together. I KNOW THIS FAILS, BUT ROFL, THEY FAIL. RETAAAARDS ( Read more... )