You are one of the few people that I will read het for, and this time was no mistake - hot as fuck and just when I think I can't take any more of it, you hit me with such tenderness...
OmG! This was the they come together (Daniel gets a clue) moment-thing-time-place. I love how peaceful it all feels. How gentle and quiet and oh so Daniel and Cammie. Just lovely over all.
And this: Modern architects have no sense at all., just had me loling like mad, followed by: because her filing system is completely and utterly wrong.. Then there was Daniel's realisations and, god, how adorable he is? *g* But the end take the cake. The last five paragraphs are utter love and the last three sentence - I *melt*.
Thank you! (I will confess, the modern-architects line was totally IG's, although I'll cop to being the book-bickering. *g*)
Daniel really is clueless sometimes, isn't he? But they made it here anyway, and yeah, I think "peaceful" is a good word for it. Even while Cammie's going to do her best to kill him with sex. (She has the impression that it's going to be good for him to loosen up a bit. *g*)
And hey, Cammie pretty much defines "good, giving, and game". And "sex-positive". And it actually won't take long at all for Daniel to realize that he's much happier if he just plays along ...
there are a few "her"s instead of "his" in places. which makes Daniel not straight for the purpose of this story, but a lesbian for the purpose of this story - and delights me to no end. *ggg*
*groan* I fail at het. (In my defense, ivorygates was writing Cammie/Dani at me in the AIM window as I was writing this.) I think I caught them all, but if you notice any left, do let me know; for the purposes of this story, Daniel is straight dammit. *g* (And thank you for catching them! I swear, you read it eight billion times...)
Well, there *was* a "her dick" (MARVELOUS, PLS MOAR OF THIS) but you caught it since I read... and there's an unrelated "delerious" where I think you want delIrious. I will say what else I see when/if I reread (I have knitting math to do, groan, if I want to cast on soon, so might not reread today).
eight billion times is never enough - it's the new eyes that do it. annoyingly!
Now I wait for the Cammie/Dani then, mmm? *goes to refresh 'gates' LJ*
*groans more* *FIXES, DAMMIT* I never spellcheck (shh, don't tell), especially in Cammie's dialect because I fucking hate having to tell it that no, all of that dialect is right and my spelling and typo-spotting is usually good enough to get by, but I have about ten or twelve personal demon words that I can never fucking spell to save my life.
Whatcha casting on for? *g* (I am working on a 4x4 basketweave stitch scarf out of SWTC's Amerah, and it is kicking my ass. I am incapable of any pattern that involves counting to four. Three, yes, five, fine, but four? I told ivorygates, whom this is destined for, that this proves that I love her.)
What a lovely thing to wake up to! (It's our anniversary, 16 years.) It's so great to see inside Daniel's head as he unbefuddles himself and appreciates, and the whole thing is making me fan the computer to keep it from catching fire.
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And thank you. *g*
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And this: Modern architects have no sense at all., just had me loling like mad, followed by: because her filing system is completely and utterly wrong.. Then there was Daniel's realisations and, god, how adorable he is? *g* But the end take the cake. The last five paragraphs are utter love and the last three sentence - I *melt*.
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Daniel really is clueless sometimes, isn't he? But they made it here anyway, and yeah, I think "peaceful" is a good word for it. Even while Cammie's going to do her best to kill him with sex. (She has the impression that it's going to be good for him to loosen up a bit. *g*)
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As she should. :P As we all should and as to loosen him up, sex, I agree, is the best way to go about it.
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there are a few "her"s instead of "his" in places. which makes Daniel not straight for the purpose of this story, but a lesbian for the purpose of this story - and delights me to no end. *ggg*
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I will say what else I see when/if I reread (I have knitting math to do, groan, if I want to cast on soon, so might not reread today).
eight billion times is never enough - it's the new eyes that do it. annoyingly!
Now I wait for the Cammie/Dani then, mmm? *goes to refresh 'gates' LJ*
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Whatcha casting on for? *g* (I am working on a 4x4 basketweave stitch scarf out of SWTC's Amerah, and it is kicking my ass. I am incapable of any pattern that involves counting to four. Three, yes, five, fine, but four? I told ivorygates, whom this is destined for, that this proves that I love her.)
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