LotS Fic: The Scars of Your Love [1/3]

Oct 17, 2011 01:36

Title: The Scars of Your Love [1/3]
Author: synergyfox
Pairing: Cara/Dahlia... I suppose it would also be considered unrequited Cara/Kahlan but still like acknowledged?
Rating: M
Warnings: Angst, crack, family issues, birds-and-the-bees... life? Oh and edits are slowly being made - my eyes are droopy however.
Word Count: 3, 254
Disclaimer: Trust me, it's ( Read more... )

pairing: cara/dahlia, pairing: cara/kahlan, fandom: legend of the seeker

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madame_denna October 17 2011, 19:05:13 UTC
I needed to read Crimson Regret once again, not that I'm missing any details here. Like I said, I love that you're continuing this story!! So much.

Aww and the children, they are so adorable..

Even when this is more a Cara/Kahlan story, I love your Cara/Dahlia pairing here. At first I thought: Ohhh poor Kahlan! But then I was more like: "You deserve it!! You deserve it to feel bad!! You believed Richard!!" Richard!! Who would believe Richard more than your own wife?? Oh boy!" yeah.. well..

And the time-jumps (?) are the best thing ever! Love it! and this time I didn't cry, that is good! ;) *happy dance*

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synergyfox October 19 2011, 17:54:38 UTC
That is because you are a fic addict, you silly, silly girl. Couldn't resist not continuing the story.

The bbs need snuggles, they're seriously adorkable and just made of awesome. I'm a bit more attached to them than I should be.

Gah, the pairing was so damned confusing... cos it's C/K... but it's C/D... but not... just... gah! *flails hard* Aw, well... ;) I think you'll probably be a bit more Kahlan-sided in the next two updates.

Don't think there'll be many tears in this fic.

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strongwoman62 October 18 2011, 01:14:48 UTC
I read Crimson Regret right before this and it just about broke my heart. This chapter might be tough on Kahlan, but it gave me a few moments to enjoy Cara's life with Dahlia. I'm glad she had some happiness despite being unjustly banished from Kahlan's life.

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synergyfox October 20 2011, 06:14:25 UTC
I don't think I've ever been sadder writing a fic before as when I was writing Crimson Regret. That was honestly the first time I'd ever killed a character too. Quite depressing.

Cara defiantly had some happy times while parted from Kahlan, but in the end it was still sad for her. I'm glad you are enjoying the heartbreaky mess so far.

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chickinwhite October 18 2011, 05:07:36 UTC
Ah, you like breaking hearts, don´t you?
Ok, I´m over the point where I wanted to slap Kahlan, hard! Now, PLEASE!! She suffered enough, she sees she was soOOOO wrong!
AND! I am totally on her side _ not surprised?- when she thinks Dahlia has no right! to dance with Cara, much less to moan and be pleasured where it should be Kahlan who is at Cara´s side. (Though, even I, who is NEVER one to friend Dahlia, may be a tiny lil thankful that she is there, when Cara needs someone/*coughs-Kahlan-coughs*

Very touching, babe! Ißm waiting for more!

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synergyfox October 19 2011, 17:59:18 UTC
Hell yes I like breaking hearts, it's like necessary for me to live.

:) Good, because like seriously, she's going to go through enough wibbly moments and is gonna need some reader support (cos I'm not going lightly on her in any way, shape or form in the next two chapters). Hopefully this will make people all kinds of :3 at Dahlia - specially as it goes on. Cos I'm biased and I love her so much.

*bows*

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evanevieveblack October 18 2011, 06:08:15 UTC
Naw my heart breaking senses are tingling. But gah I love it.

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synergyfox October 20 2011, 07:20:36 UTC
It's gonna break even harder. Maybe a few tears here and there?

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evanevieveblack October 20 2011, 07:28:56 UTC
There's a special place in hell for people who make people cry with their stories.

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synergyfox October 20 2011, 09:53:38 UTC
And yet you still adore me and love me unconditionally.

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musicffyou October 19 2011, 03:33:15 UTC
I honestly believe that
“Powerful magic and prophecy tend to throw everyone for a loop.”
is the answer to every question in the LoTS world. I'm mucho excited to read anything from you missy because I have missed thee :)

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synergyfox October 20 2011, 07:21:28 UTC
Hell yes powerful magic and prophecy is the answer to every question in the LotS world - and the real world too obviously. I have missed thee too my... child? Am I a MILF? I still don't get it.

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musicffyou October 21 2011, 14:01:41 UTC
I'm married to your fics...all of them...thus your my mother in-law. Hey mom...wow that freaked me out...we're gonna have to think of something else to call you.

ps: I may have made some other marriege proposals and I may or MAY NOT be married into another family >.>

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synergyfox October 21 2011, 18:06:18 UTC
So long as you told my figs it was an open marriage I can deal ;)

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