The Scars of Your Love [3/3]

Oct 24, 2011 04:41

Title: The Scars of Your Love [3/3]
Author: synergyfox
Pairing: Cara/Dahlia, Cara/Kahlan
Rating: M
Warnings: Nothing triggery.
Word Count: 2,298
Disclaimer: Trust me, it's a good thing I don't own LotS because there would be a lot more nekkid and Mord'Sith.
Summary: A chance to right past wrongs.

This would be the... sequel to Crimson Regret.

Seriously, ( Read more... )

pairing: cara/dahlia, pairing: cara/kahlan, fandom: legend of the seeker

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julz_t October 24 2011, 21:52:10 UTC
NSFW! I was reading this during my special relativity lecture and oh my god, my mate next to me was like ''what's up with you?'' cause I was so upset one moment and smiling like an idiot towards the end.

First of all, the title! - all the while I was reading this I have ''the scars of your love, remind me of us, they keep me thinking that we almost have it all.'' playing in my head (in a very sad way) and it just becomes so overwhelming when a particular sad line comes up. (Basically whenever Cara mentions Kahlan or Kahlan trying to touch Cara).
I love this story so much; it brings out so much feelingsssss!!!!! Poor Cara *hug*, poor Kahlan *hug*, and Dahlia honey, I'm so glad Cara has Dahlia to raise her kids with her.
All the characters are so lovable in this fic (except Richard obviously)! I just want to see them be all happy and cuddle all the time. >And I can't believe this is a happy ending; after the first two parts, I fully expected this to be so angsty that I would just curl up in a ball in the middle of my lecture room. lol ( ... )

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synergyfox October 25 2011, 22:51:01 UTC
Hmm, I do suppose I should start to include NSFW warnings, huh? XD Don't worry, he probably only thinks you're bipolar or mentally unstable now.

You can thank thedawn for the appropriate use of that title. I'm insanely glad you enjoyed the story and yes... they all need hugs (except Richard). Let's just let them have one giant cuddle orgy.

It has... a happy ending for now.

Aw... not the middle of the lecture room! People would be like O.o

*beams and hugs* Glad you find me awesome.

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evanevieveblack October 25 2011, 02:18:38 UTC
*sniff* Dahlia and Cara...and Kahlan all heart broken and Sonia and Sam and-and it so good :)

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synergyfox October 25 2011, 22:51:29 UTC
*hands over tissue box* There there. More angst on the way.

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evanevieveblack October 25 2011, 22:57:35 UTC
More? That's evil! Writing angst and breaking people's hearts.
Well, at least you're clever at it :P

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synergyfox November 17 2011, 08:34:17 UTC
Didn't you hear? It's how I roll - shredding hearts with a dull and rusty cheese grater from 1741.

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jacofclub October 25 2011, 06:47:58 UTC
You have made me a happy girl! And I truly enjoyed the way Kahlan handle Richard toward the end. Can we say justice? “See to it that he is treated just as he treated my mate.” I think this may hurt a bit Lord Rahl. Excellent post.

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synergyfox October 25 2011, 22:54:55 UTC
WELL! I am very glad that I managed to make you happy and that you enjoyed the way Kahlan handled everything.

Oh... yes... justice...

That'll come... one day?

Glad you enjoyed!

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vanchidel October 25 2011, 10:21:48 UTC
Give... me... more... ;)

Loved this! Especially the reverse order of events, and that you managed to turn this bitersweet, sad story into a happy ending ;)

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synergyfox October 25 2011, 22:56:16 UTC
More... shall... come especially since I'm one of the few writers not participating in NaNoWriMo this year.

*wipes brow* I am never writing in reverse order again. That injured my brain. But huzzah! Glad you enjoyed it.

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vanchidel October 26 2011, 11:28:33 UTC
Hehe ;) Yeah, writing in reverse order is quite a challenge ;) and you did it really well :)

*happy there will be more* :D

Err... who else is participating in NaNo? Anyone from our LotS fan community I might know? :)

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synergyfox October 26 2011, 19:27:45 UTC
It did give me a chance to write whatever da fuq I wanted at that moment in time though! *must use notes more often* I'm glad I pulled it off good enough.

*may have abandoned Halloween fic in favor of bbs as this series has so been dubbed*

I know for sure that thedawn is, that's why she's pushing out a lot of fic really fast, and I believe our lovely evanevieveblack is as well. ivanolix and I aren't because like... we have issues with deadlines and meeting them. *thinks* I know a few others are I just can't call them off the top of my head.

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anonymous October 25 2011, 15:23:57 UTC
I'm not sure how she goes about arresting Richard.
First off, what's the chain of command there?
Second, what crime did he commit? Cara's pregnant - the logical assumption is that she was unfaithful. Sure, that's not the case, but no one has any reason for thinking otherwise. If anything, Richard's just mistaken.

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synergyfox October 25 2011, 21:44:20 UTC
We will address this in order of your queries, will that appease your delicate sensibilities? I would not wish to insult your intelligence after all, that would be rude and uncalled for.

I'm not sure how she goes about arresting Richard.
Silly, she did not arrest him - the Home Guard seized him.

"What's the chain of command there?"
Well... that is an incredibly difficult question and I just do not think I am qualified to answer it. Let us play the guessing game though, that should help us figure it out relatively fast. They're in the Aydindril. Oh shoot! That may have answered the question right there! Who is in charge? Name escapes me sadly. Pretty woman. White dress. Dark hair. Kinda busty. Rules the Midlands. Word is law. Just went backwards in time to right her wrongs. Shoot, name? Anyone?

What crime did he commit?
Oh my, somebody call the President of the Colonies! An author who does not spell every single thing out for their readers when there is a sequel planned (and not to mention alluded to in the author's notes)? This ( ... )

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