Title: The Scars of Your Love [3/3]
Author: synergyfox
Pairing: Cara/Dahlia, Cara/Kahlan
Rating: M
Warnings: Nothing triggery.
Word Count: 2,298
Disclaimer: Trust me, it's a good thing I don't own LotS because there would be a lot more nekkid and Mord'Sith.
Summary: A chance to right past wrongs.
This would be the... sequel to
Crimson Regret.
Seriously,
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First of all, the title! - all the while I was reading this I have ''the scars of your love, remind me of us, they keep me thinking that we almost have it all.'' playing in my head (in a very sad way) and it just becomes so overwhelming when a particular sad line comes up. (Basically whenever Cara mentions Kahlan or Kahlan trying to touch Cara).
I love this story so much; it brings out so much feelingsssss!!!!! Poor Cara *hug*, poor Kahlan *hug*, and Dahlia honey, I'm so glad Cara has Dahlia to raise her kids with her.
All the characters are so lovable in this fic (except Richard obviously)! I just want to see them be all happy and cuddle all the time. >And I can't believe this is a happy ending; after the first two parts, I fully expected this to be so angsty that I would just curl up in a ball in the middle of my lecture room. lol ( ... )
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You can thank thedawn for the appropriate use of that title. I'm insanely glad you enjoyed the story and yes... they all need hugs (except Richard). Let's just let them have one giant cuddle orgy.
It has... a happy ending for now.
Aw... not the middle of the lecture room! People would be like O.o
*beams and hugs* Glad you find me awesome.
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Well, at least you're clever at it :P
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Oh... yes... justice...
That'll come... one day?
Glad you enjoyed!
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Loved this! Especially the reverse order of events, and that you managed to turn this bitersweet, sad story into a happy ending ;)
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*wipes brow* I am never writing in reverse order again. That injured my brain. But huzzah! Glad you enjoyed it.
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*happy there will be more* :D
Err... who else is participating in NaNo? Anyone from our LotS fan community I might know? :)
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*may have abandoned Halloween fic in favor of bbs as this series has so been dubbed*
I know for sure that thedawn is, that's why she's pushing out a lot of fic really fast, and I believe our lovely evanevieveblack is as well. ivanolix and I aren't because like... we have issues with deadlines and meeting them. *thinks* I know a few others are I just can't call them off the top of my head.
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First off, what's the chain of command there?
Second, what crime did he commit? Cara's pregnant - the logical assumption is that she was unfaithful. Sure, that's not the case, but no one has any reason for thinking otherwise. If anything, Richard's just mistaken.
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I'm not sure how she goes about arresting Richard.
Silly, she did not arrest him - the Home Guard seized him.
"What's the chain of command there?"
Well... that is an incredibly difficult question and I just do not think I am qualified to answer it. Let us play the guessing game though, that should help us figure it out relatively fast. They're in the Aydindril. Oh shoot! That may have answered the question right there! Who is in charge? Name escapes me sadly. Pretty woman. White dress. Dark hair. Kinda busty. Rules the Midlands. Word is law. Just went backwards in time to right her wrongs. Shoot, name? Anyone?
What crime did he commit?
Oh my, somebody call the President of the Colonies! An author who does not spell every single thing out for their readers when there is a sequel planned (and not to mention alluded to in the author's notes)? This ( ... )
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