Title: The Scars of Your Love [3/3]
Author: synergyfox
Pairing: Cara/Dahlia, Cara/Kahlan
Rating: M
Warnings: Nothing triggery.
Word Count: 2,298
Disclaimer: Trust me, it's a good thing I don't own LotS because there would be a lot more nekkid and Mord'Sith.
Summary: A chance to right past wrongs.
This would be the... sequel to
Crimson Regret.
Seriously,
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*falls to your feet* *bows* You made everything better!! Yay!! Stupid Richard. *pokes Richard* I looooooooved this whole sequel and the original story. (Okay, I may have mentioned that I wanted to burn my eyes out so I wouldn't cry while reading Crimson Regret and that reading the sequel was like being in a bear trap but those things were said with love. Angsty, angsty love. *grin*)
Seriously....the children are the absolute best and even though it was painful to have Kahlan watching those scenes play out, I loved the little snippets of life that you created. The reverse timeline was awesome. :-)
Great job with this story......as always, looking forward to more from you! Thanks for writing! :-)
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*watches bear trap and luggage go flying* You... may want to keep those for the sequel... or one shots...
*pats head* Now just say your devotions and all will be well my child. Angsty = love for sure.
Gah, those children grew on me way more than they should have and I am super glad you enjoyed the snippets I chucked at you.
Thank you for commenting, quality comment is quality.
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Really? F**ker.
*prepares to base jump into the ravine*
If you're teasing me, I'm gonna be pissed. I don't even like that suitcase.....
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*innocent grin*
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I don't really ship Cara and Dahlia, but this fic almost makes me feel sorry for all the awesome things Dahlia's going to miss with Cara and her children. But still, C/K ftw! I'm so glad this had a happy ending. Can't wait to read more of your stuff :)
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I may yet make you ship C/D, it's seriously going to become my mission in life pretty soon. Specially when you see what Dahlia gave up to go with Cara. Willingly at that. ;)
Happy ending >_>
For now.
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Kahlan watching the lives she missed carry on without her was heartbreaking. Everything that happened to Cara just slayed me.
And then the END, hnnng. It was a happy one, and I feel so joyful for them but also just so wibbly. And I just want to hug everyone. Mostly Cara.
Thanks for sharing this fantastic story. I can't wait for these promised one-shots! :D
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I'm glad the conglomeration of feelings made you happy inside at the end though. That was the goal from the very beginning.
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I do not know if I am happy or glad with it.
Over all I L-O-V-E it, to the extent of 'I have bought it an engagement ring.' ;) Well not really a ring, it's a new born terrior puppy, me dog had dog babies. Same thing ne?
But Cara and Dahlia! You can't just erase that. X( I love their coupling more than Kahlan and Cara. They are wonderful mommies together. Sonia talking about pleasing her man-bitch made me feel awkward. No one ever gave me "the talk." Oh! And Sam using the breath of life= awesome.
But it was all so lovely and wonderful and all that stuffing goodness. Totally happy with it, great story.
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Nobody ever gave me the talk either but I hear it is quite awkward. My parents just let the school system do it for them. XD
Yeah... Sam will certainly come into play more with the Breath of Life in further extensions of this story as will Sonia and her badassery. Maybe even her betrothed, who knows.
Bwaha... I'm glad you loved it over all.
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Oh Dahlia, always the victim. At least Kahlan has to live with what she knows. It's a small victory but I will take it.
I'd like to think I was adult about puking when a friend told me what a man and a woman had to do to make a baby. I was only eight at the time.
It really is a great story, even though you pulled a major Zedd. :P
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But don't worry, ~things will come to pass now this has happened. Not everything is roses and sunshine, especially when Cara finds out.
Bwah. *evil glint*
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