Reboot Fic: Top Dogs [Pike/Dael/Kirk] NC-17, Draws Universe

[syredronning]

Title: Top Dogs
Author: syredronning aka Acidqueen
Series: Reboot aka ST:XI aka AOS - Draws Universe
Codes: Pike/Dael/Kirk; Pike/Dael/Kirk/McCoy implied
Rating: NC-17; kinky, puppy-play, mixed threesome
Word count: 3650
Author's Note: This is a stand-alone story in the Draws Universe, written more than a year ago. It doesn't fit into the main timeline

Comments

[izzyfics]

Outtakes are fun!

What I always like about your stories is the emotional sucker punch mixed in with the porny funtimes. In this one, it was Jim quietly saying that Dael is Pike's and is merely borrowing her. Add this to Pike's breakdown in your newest installment, and it's really powerful.

Oh, and love that McCoy is in the background, (most likely) shaking his head and grumbling. :)

[syredronning]

Thanks a lot! This foursome just cannot engage into porny fun without getting thinky too. Big cock-blockers, all of them :P

[orphica]

Ah, Dael,what a lucky girl. Loved this!

[syredronning]

Thank you! *bounces* :)

[illariy]

Mmmhmm, hot. Lovely how Jim deals with Chris' jealousy and I'm rather amazed at how far Dael has come that she can be so dominant now. Hot! Thanks for sharing.

[syredronning]

In a way, this story would've been set in the future but the main series drifted along unplanned angles with Chris' health problem (definitely no puppy fight for him anymore) and the even more complicated foursome structure, so it will never really fit but was too hot to discard :)

In the main series, Dael also has a high kink potential but mostly lives that out with Jim; she signals Chris pretty clearly that she'd be open for more on that front but he never really takes her up on it.

[illariy]

Yeah, it doesn't have the feel of belonging entirely to the main series. My brain has now decided that it wants to read this outtake as one of the characters' dream/fantasy and is currently pondering whose it might be. From your response, probably Dael's. *g*

[syredronning]

*giggles* Good point about the dream!

The story definitely doesn't fit into the main timeline but I can imagine to write more stories in a "Draws Universe" - especially considering that I've got another kinky outtake available that doesn't really fit anymore *cough*

[abigail89]

Fabubulously hot. The little games they play are interesting, and they play with the dynamics between the 4 of them. Jim's acknowledgment that Dael is Chris's is quite a huge admission, especially in light of how your newest chapter ends (which reminds me, I need to write comments!) I'm sure that sauna really felt good after the workout.

Well done!

[syredronning]

Thanks a lot! The question "who belongs to whom" is rather fluid depending on what any of them feels in any given moment, but that's part of the fun of writing a foursome :)

(And I'd definitely love more comments on Draws XI ♥)

[secretsolitaire]

GUH! Quite hot, although Chris's jealousy and Jim's awareness of it make me want to hug both of them.

[syredronning]

Thank you! Some emotional complexities will remain, no matter how tightly knit their foursome becomes, and that's a major part of the fun of writing them :)