{FIC} Behind the Closed Door (2/?)

Sep 28, 2010 00:01

Minho and Taemin were playing the playstation when Jonghyun was barging inside their dorm and slamming the door behind him. His action made Taemin winched in freight. They both paused the game and stared at the growing shadow that fell to the living room.

“..hyung? what happened?” Minho asked when he saw Jonghyun entering the living room heading ( Read more... )

pairing:onkey, rating:pg-15, fanfiction

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heenoona September 27 2010, 18:01:27 UTC
Jong cinderella...lol

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 28 2010, 00:36:58 UTC
yeah.. jongierella kinda possesed me.
i feel embaressed after writing it. -.-

thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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midnight808 September 27 2010, 20:13:31 UTC
awww feel better soon ^^

lol at Jjong thinking he is Cinderella XD

oh wow Onkey going at it at 1.23 pm , hehe poor jjong

cant wait for the next chapter

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 28 2010, 00:39:45 UTC
teehee~ thank you. I feel all better now after a nice sleep last night. xD

yeah.. i'll try to write it better next time. coz seriously i feel something wrong with this chapter

thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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scribbles526 September 27 2010, 21:01:17 UTC
poor jjong :)
lol it's ok cinderella, ur prince joon saved u from the torture
this is so funny~

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 28 2010, 00:42:02 UTC
LOL at your comment. XD XD
may be i should pair them. xD

thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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mankadi September 27 2010, 22:47:32 UTC
yay you have updated :DD
and lolz~jjong reaction to the boys XD
weird to see jjong like that~ aint like himself~
he just need to find love~ soon :33
maybe joon? XDD
and fuck!! i demand to know what onkey doing there -puppy eyes-
not that i dont know XD
oh well~~ =3=

waiting for more unnie :)))
<33

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 28 2010, 00:47:44 UTC
ahahaha~
i wanted to try to write Jonghyun being overreacted, but i'm lacking of idea what to write. so i ended up like this. xD

hahaha~ Onkey, 2min, then Jjongjoon would be a nice idea.
i hope i can find idea how to pair them. x_x

lol
i'll try to write something bout it, may be an epilogue?! kkkkk~ xD
i dunno, i still don't have ability to write smut.
may be i should learn it from you. xD

yeah~ thank you, baby..
i'll do my best for the next chapter.

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asuka100492 September 28 2010, 04:44:28 UTC
yay update!!! <3

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 28 2010, 05:56:51 UTC
Yay comment!! <3

thank you for reading~ <3

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