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takadainmate

Not ironing

Aug 11, 2012 23:47

Title: Over Spring
Rating: PG
Words: 5,834
Summary: Kid Loki and Thor. Set after Journey into Mystery 641.

After, Loki hides himself away. But Thor will find his brother.

My sort-of thanks to gnine for forcing me to write this, and to cienna for her always-helpful betaing.

( Loki has always been one for shadows, for not being found when he doesn't want to be )

fic:journey into mystery, fic

Comments 15

xparrot August 11 2012, 23:32:42 UTC

Waaaah you posted it, I have been waiting for this! And it did not disappoint - oh, Thor, you love your brother, you care so much, and try so hard. And Loki is trying too. And the beach was beautiful and there were sandcastles and swimming and forgetting whether or not they needed to breathe, and wonderful sibling snarking and also hugs~~~! Yes, Thor, very good, kid!Loki needs all the hugs...(while we still have him to give them to him *sobsobsob*)

And Loki mourning...and Thori, too... *sniffle*

takadainmate August 13 2012, 09:14:14 UTC

You can blame your sis that it didn't get posted sooner! She made me work on the next fic instead of finishing the editing on this one.

Glad you liked it! I think I actually made myself depressed writing this, but everytime I think of Leah I'm just so sad... :(

grey_bard August 12 2012, 00:21:38 UTC

Oh, oh Thor. It's a little late - he's been busy - but Loki needs him more than ever now and this felt just right.

takadainmate August 13 2012, 09:15:44 UTC

Glad you liked this! I had to have some comfort for poor bb!Loki after everything that happened...

gnine August 12 2012, 04:11:52 UTC

Whee, it's so nice to be able to read this on in one sitting! ^___- And it neeeded to be written, I have no regrets! Loki needed those hugs!! ^__^ Do so love this! ^^

takadainmate August 13 2012, 09:16:56 UTC

Also, we had an agreement. I want my accompanying art now plz!

This really wouldn't have been written without you and I'm glad it was, despite how depressing it is...

cienna August 12 2012, 06:43:34 UTC

So glad you finally posted this! It's a painful read, but definitely worth it! Bb!Loki needs all the hugs!! I was very glad to see him getting the attention he deserves from Thor. If only he could get some of that attention in canon. I especially loved the way you portrayed his grief and Thor's reaction to it. I loved how he was trying so hard to find some way, any way he could help. And I do think he managed to get through to bb!Loki in the end and help at least a little. Now let's just hope that Thor doesn't lose bb!Loki canon because who will comfort him!?? ;_;

takadainmate August 13 2012, 09:35:29 UTC

You can blame gnine for how long it took! She made me start on the Thori fic!

BB!Loki definitely needs all the hugs in the world. I need all the hugs in the world after that chapter... ;_;

miki_moo August 12 2012, 10:47:33 UTC

Painful and perfect, it has just the right tone and you write them both so well!

Now go write more. Go.

takadainmate August 13 2012, 09:45:25 UTC

Et tu, Miki? If you give me some Nighwing h/c fic recs I will consider writing more. >D

Glad you liked this though. It was so depressing to write...

miki_moo August 13 2012, 10:00:55 UTC

Done. I shall track some down and send them this eve lol!

Write me some Nightwing fic and I will find you some cute/angsty Dick centric one-shot comics as well...

I can imagine it was - but it was what I want to see in the comic - some good follow through. So thanks for providing the fix!