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Perfectly Suited

Jul 13, 2011 16:13

Title: Perfectly Suited
Prompt: Matching Patronuses
Characters: James Potter, Lily Evans, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew
Words: 500
Author's Note: This drabble was written in response to a prompt regarding matching Patronuses. I found further inspiration from Merriam Webster's word of the day. The word was Beltane: the Celtic May Day ( Read more... )

lily/james, lily, james

Comments 2

shimotsuki July 15 2011, 14:51:42 UTC

I like so many things here. It's fun to see Lily bantering with the boys -- and letting them know she knows what they get up to. And hair insecurity followed by Fortunately, she was going out with James (hee!). I was glad that Remus thought to ask Lily what she wanted, too.

I hope she does get her robin!

zia_montrose July 15 2011, 16:40:42 UTC

That thoughtful Remus. ; ) Actually, my biggest problem with this drabble is that I so wanted a few extra words to explain that Remus might not be so keen to show off his Patronus as the rest, y'know? Unless they really rallied his spirits, he was probably cringing at the thought.

Thanks for reading!