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[talkstocoyotes]

NOTE: This isn't the last completed chapter. There's a glitch on the next page that makes it display as "No Entry," but Chapter 21 is at http://talkstocoyotes.livejournal.com/6434.html and Chapter 22 at http://talkstocoyotes.livejournal.com/6843.html

Chapter 20

The attic room was short and narrow, its sparse furnishings hinting that it hadn’t been

Comments

[coffeecat33]

Well I was going to wait until you had the next chapter posted, but of course I couldn't wait. You know how much I like this story. I like your description of things in this chapter, like the paintings. -L.

ps one tiny error I think:
Riverton church when he’d heard Jack’s unseen hand in his

maybe held Jack's unseen hand ?

[talkstocoyotes]

Oy! I went back and corrected that.

Some of my chapters have had doozies -- like the reference to the 'macaroni and bee casserole'.

[under_wyo_skies]

'macaroni and bee casserole'

*giggles*

I wrote a sex scene where, instead of bucking, they were busking LOLOL

[talkstocoyotes]

I wrote a sex scene where, instead of bucking, they were busking

Hey, I looked up "busking" and found: "Busking is the practice of doing live performances in public places to entertain people, usually to solicit donations and tips."

Ennis would never combine sex with busking, though....

[talkstocoyotes]

Thanks so much for your encouragement all of you -- I promise there will be more happening in the next few chapters! This part of the book has been proceeding at 'Ennis speed...'

It's true that Jack won't be contacting Ennis as much but he's just as close by, and he meant it when he said he'll be there if Ennis needs him.

[landofthedragon]

So happy to see an update I've been avidly waiting for more of this wonderful story.

The signifigance of the pictures seemed like a revelation to Ennis as a sign and acceptance in moving on with his life even refering to Davids place as his new home.

The ending was very intriguing as to who startled ennis from his reverie. Can't wait for more of this exceptional story.

Thankyou L

[ifyoucantfixit1]

Marcia, i am so glad to see you are going to do more of this story. I love it and its wonderful to revisit it as you have the want to work on it again. Thank you very much for this spiritual and ethereal, story. I love the cross play of the shirts, versus the graveyard scenes. Showing they both have their own crypts. Thanks again and if necessary i would also like to be friended. janice

[sweetje]

I think I miss Jack almost as much as Ennis. It's hard to imagine Ennis's life without his Jack, but I'm sure that Jack will still make his presense knowwn in one form or another.
Debra