The Sunbeam Flaring in Your Body

[bloodofpyke]

the sunbeam flaring in your body | zayn/niall | pg | 1,567 | they fit together, he and Niall, and he thinks he likes that best of all, the quiet moments they sneak and stack up stretched out on cold hotel beds, Niall's fingers wrapped round his wrist. | unbeta'd, but read over by britt and a handful of other wonderful people. any mistakes within

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[saycomfychairs]

I HAVE TO GO BACK TO WORK BC MY LUNCH HOUR HAS ALREADY BEEN A LUNCH HOUR AND A HALF BUT THIS IS SO EXCITING AND I CAN'T WAIT TO COME HOME AND READ IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[saycomfychairs]

okay back!!!!

let's go through this bit by bit because it is perfect and I am actually in love with it? like I said, please never ever stop writing this ship. It's like you knew I was having a zayn/niall spiral and were like I WILL WRITE FIC THAT WILL RUIN ALISHA'S LIFE!!!!

...it feels a bit bigger now, like maybe it’s sort of growing into his ribs after all.
this is the best sentence of all sentences ever. I love how it's shaped and put together and the whole heart size thing is theeeee best.

like the sun is something that can be kept, held
ughhh noooo stop. I refuse to adress this line.

because he thinks he understands, about the hotel rooms
WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME LEAH? I H8 U. (I love you, don't ever stop)

his too big, too cold, too empty room / anything that’s not in his room.
ughh all zayn wants to do is get away so he can feel less stuck in this life that moves too fast but instead Niall comes into that place that makes Zayn feel less empty and fills up the room and zayn with everything he is which is sunshine and

[bloodofpyke]

(what if i'm already writing like two other fics for these idiots WHAT IF) (i want my life back)

and thank you, my gosh it means so much to have you say such lovely things about my writing because your words make me want to run around screaming about their perfection

<333

[saycomfychairs]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh GOOD. YOU WRITE THOSE TWO OTHER FICS. Your Zayn is perfect are the others still from his POV? I AM EXCITED EITHER WAY. I love you so much!!!!!!!!

[azaliaisme]

I...kinda love this story? Gives me so much feel. Thank you for writing this! :)

[bloodofpyke]

thank you so much!! <3

[loribeast]

Ah this is beautiful! I've had real feels for these two lately, and ugh. This is just lovely.

[bloodofpyke]

ahhh thank you!! and same, they sort of snuck up on me in the past few days!

[sburet84]

love this :)

*samantha*

[bloodofpyke]

thank you!!! <3

[reginablair]

I didn't know I shipped this, but this fic made me smile.
And crave hot dogs. More please??

[bloodofpyke]

ahh thank you, that really means a lot!! i don't know if i can do anything about the hot dogs, but i can definitely try to write more :)