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The Only Heart He Knows

Jun 10, 2012 12:18

the only heart he knows | zayn/liam; background harry/louis | 2,033 | pg | and he's sort of curling into it, and it's a bit like pressing on a bruise, he thinks, and he wants to smile at that, because maybe Liam's left a mark after all. | Zayn's POV through four different moments in their relationship. beta'd by the loveliest people in my life, ( Read more... )

zayn malik, liam payne, one direction, zayn x liam

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jennifer_95 June 12 2012, 20:40:34 UTC

Normally fictions where one person is in love with another and it's not shown to be true back, make me sad for the person and make me sad in general and I'm like 'waaaa sad fic :('; but for some reason this one didn't. Zayn seemed really happy, so yey; no matter the fact he may not get his love, but he was happy they were friends and I think that's what I liked about this, what makes it different, because it's not sad, it's not pity me, it's like I'll take what I'll get and I'll be really happy I got it.

Okay, I'm shutting up now. I loved this!

bloodofpyke June 12 2012, 20:45:06 UTC

ah thank you!! i tried to keep it from turning into a sort of "why won't he love meeeeeeee" thing, so this really means a lot <333

gleefulvall June 14 2012, 10:45:05 UTC

(He would keep that box locked and buried until the day he died)

omg i'm so new to 1d fic but i loved this SO much that i just had to comment!! your style of writing definitely appealed to me and oh god i just got so many feelings thank you ugh i hate you

THE STYLINSON OF IT ALL

cries

bloodofpyke June 14 2012, 16:06:37 UTC

ahhhh thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it <3333

(and i think i'm incapable of writing anything without slipping in some harry/louis undertones haha)

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bloodofpyke June 16 2012, 15:10:37 UTC

ahh thank you so much, that means a lot!!

wrongbed June 24 2012, 07:27:21 UTC

Well fuck everything. This is beautiful, this is so beautiful. Your flow is so smooth and crisp and your metaphors just slide over each other and I just. Ugh. You're so good at Zayn, without over-doing it.

"He wonders if he could get a tattoo of that, wrapped round his wrist maybe, or over his heart, wonders if it would just be something bright and smooth and golden."

Excuse me while I fling myself into an ocean of feelings.

bloodofpyke June 24 2012, 17:46:05 UTC

oh wow, thank you so much, that really means a lot!! especially since i'm always unsure if i'm overdoing zayn or not! ahhhh thank you <333333

shoppermania June 30 2012, 13:32:02 UTC

oh this is so beautiful and heart-breaking!! <3333!

bloodofpyke June 30 2012, 18:17:02 UTC

eeeek thank you so much!!!!