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Smudge

Apr 11, 2013 07:12

Title: Smudge (Drabble)
Pairing: Kai/Kyungsoo
Genre: Time Control!AU
Word count: 228

( For the third time Kyungsoo blinked, the world stops. The merriment enveloping his earlobes, the beat of the feet roaring along the asphalt, the people - they all froze, apart from himself. )

Comments 10

imperfectlyevil April 11 2013, 10:49:16 UTC

it's like falling in love over and over again. ♥

taobox April 12 2013, 00:37:57 UTC

yep yep oh the kaisoo feels haha. thank you for reading, love! :)

tsukibob April 11 2013, 23:30:40 UTC

Ohh, the amount of different emotions I got from such a short piece was wonderful. This genre is always the best because it allows the reader to create their own narrative and oh, my I have so many lovely imaginative ideas haha, I love it!

taobox April 12 2013, 00:40:06 UTC

Hahaha! I am glad to know that you loved it! Thank you for reading, love :)

ugh_usernames April 12 2013, 21:28:26 UTC

literally perfect and well written and perfect. did i mention that already? the way its described is just so well described i could picture it in my head. short but sweet ^_^ <3

taobox April 13 2013, 07:52:35 UTC

haha! thank you so much, love! :)

diokris April 15 2013, 12:04:38 UTC

omg this is so short but perfect ;0;

i hope its longer or you gonna make the full length fic pretty please?? ;; but still this fic is great <3

taobox April 15 2013, 12:09:11 UTC

thank you, love! I'm still thinking about making a full version of this (because I'm afraid I'll only have my head exploded for thinking too much ;~;). thank you again! :)

allafloat April 19 2013, 00:18:42 UTC

Poignant yet sweet. Is it bad to want more of this verse? I feel like it has so much potential to be...epic? Haha but really this is already so perfect. Thanks for sharing ♥

taobox April 19 2013, 02:24:02 UTC

Oh believe me, I also want more ;~; haha, unfortunately though, my mind's not cooperating at the moment. Anywho, thank you so much, love! :)