Fathers and Sons (1/4) PG to R

[tardislullabye]

Title: Fathers and Sons (1/4)

Author: Gail R. Delaney

Series: The Unseen and In Between

Setting: After Fear Her

Genre: Romance, Angst

Rating: PG this chapter

Disclaimer: Not mine. If I owned Doctor Who, Christopher Eccleston and David Tennant would be my own private little playmates.

Summary: “I was a dad once.” He answered her

Comments

[morrighangw]

Oh my goodness. This is beautiful.

[tardislullabye]

Thank you.

But, it's just getting started. :-)

Congratulations on being the first comment

[bananasandroses]

Ooh ... I am definitely intrigued now. And that last line is one heck of a cliff-hanger!

[tardislullabye]

:-) Thought it was a nice place to leave off. :-)

Glad I've intrigued you. :-)

[azriona]

*eyes wide*

Oooohhhh. Well, this leaves more questions than it answers, doesn't it? Susan is human...a recessive gene popping up? Lorelei's eyes intent on her father...because she knows it's his fault that her daughter is different?

Oh, I'm intrigued. Very much so....

The blanket...was it Susan's? The child!Tardis - not Susan, I'm guessing, since Susan had dark hair (as an adult, anyway), and as I recall, child!Tardis has blonde hair. Hmm. Still a mystery. More, please.

[tardislullabye]

*pieces turning, sliding into place*

It will all come together. I promise.

[azriona]

I trust you. I just can't wait to see how it works. :)

[anneebrat]

One chap and already ya got me wanting more...Susan human...oh man what a way to end it. Update soon please

[tardislullabye]

Very soon. I promise.

[tardislullabye]

Well, I figure if he's going to tell anyone, it'd be Rose. :-)

I'm trying to blend canon with my own ideas to make it seem as close to possible as... well... possible. :-)

Next chapter soon.