A treatise against contrivance

[targetshooting]

To A Girl, Regarding the Deus Ex MachinaYou still think romantic comedies come true. For example

Comments

[heaven_spawn]

You're already quite good with the prose poem, but I'm not too keen on this one being prose poem. Some 'intuition' tells me if it were a more classic format with verses and line cuts, you'll better highlight the 'dramatic twists' a poem about deus ex machina can do. Like, the "!" moments can appear more sharply that way

[targetshooting]

Thanks dude! Will go on to polish this some more. :)