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Jan 04, 2008 22:20

Title: Eros
Author: Tatia85
Rating: NC-17 [and not always for sex!].
Notes: This story contains reference to harsh situations. For more disclaimers please see the introduction here: http://tatia85.livejournal.com/1158.html#cutid1 .
Note 2°: Another chapter long delayed *sighs* I know all my five readers [thank you, really!^__^] were waiting, but I ( Read more... )

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Comments 24

trekfan January 4 2008, 23:05:22 UTC

oh now this is getting GOOD I want to see them get together like FNIT

more please

trekfan January 5 2008, 10:07:45 UTC

FNIT? =P I fear my limited english skill doesn't allow me to understand what this means! =D

Well, I hope you won't be disappointed! Thank you for answering ^_^

tatia85 January 5 2008, 10:09:07 UTC

that was me... forgot to log in! =P

trekfan January 5 2008, 14:50:23 UTC

First Night in the Tent

samtyr January 4 2008, 23:24:48 UTC

I am still fascinated by this fic. You are doing a wonderful job with it and I can't wait for the FNIT scene. You've done a lot of research and it's paying off in the quality of your work. Thank you so very much for sharing this.

tatia85 January 5 2008, 10:10:13 UTC

Thank YOU for always commenting ^-^ It is rather depressing when none does ^-^

Researchs are funny! At least, I love it lol. you are welcome =D

wild_shadowfire January 5 2008, 01:10:56 UTC

Weird! I was thinking about this story just a few hours ago - and now I see a new chapter! :D Nice coincidence.
Ah, this story has me intrigued, confused, but intrigued. ;)
Write on, please! :)

tatia85 January 5 2008, 10:12:33 UTC

I am writing, I swear! Only yesterday I had to delete all the 5° chapter =_= cause Miss Dumb Writer [aka me] had forgotten that Ennis was hurt... can you be dumber than that? >.<°°°

If there is something that confuse you, write here or send me a message =) Maybe I am not clear about some detail^^ and I would like to know =)

Thank for commenting ^__^

sweetje January 5 2008, 09:08:33 UTC

I like the idea of a cracked pipe in place of a harmonca. I was wondering whta instrument Jack would be using since I don't think there were any harmonicas in ancient times. ; )

I'll be honest. I hated the first part, but then that's only because I love animals and I don't like to see anything get hurt. But it was written very well in any case.

I'm beginning to understand more of this story, and now that we're coming into familiar territory, it should be a littl easier for me to follow. I know. I'm dense. But I am enjoying this story and I'm grateful for your explanations at the end. They help me understand.

I'm looking forward to your next chapter. : )
Debra

tatia85 January 5 2008, 10:16:21 UTC

you aren't dense! The story is only very historical, that's all^^ and, not easy to follow. Really, if there are some details you don't understand tell me. Count anyway that there are... 3 chapter or 4, before the story comes to the Persian War [which is the central part of the fiction] this here is a little bit a "prequel"^^ I was even thinking about making small books [3 of them]: pre-war, in war and end of the story =P

I don't love the first part neither, I just wanted to show how war is descrutive not only for humans but for nature as well...

Thank you for alway commenting!^__^

dewbath January 5 2008, 10:47:02 UTC

Firstly, I have to apologize for my bad behaviour. I haven't left any comments before!
Secondly, you caught my interest and held it. You're doing a nice job with this original setting. I like your style, too. It's sort of clipped but still poetic at times. You've got fresh ways of saying things, for example "...only gems over their long limbs". It may be due to you not being natively English-speaking, or me (maybe I just haven't heard those before).
Good luck with the smex struggle! You can do it!

tatia85 January 7 2008, 21:02:03 UTC

You shouln't apologize at all! I never leave comment *ashamed* i just have seldom something to tell!

Now I'll tell you a secret ;-) Those immages aren't completely mine. They came from ancient greek poets, almost of that period ^-^ Or before. Not all of them, of course, but that is the style.^^

dewbath January 8 2008, 12:02:42 UTC

Another case that proves there's nothing new under the sun! ;)
Still, it's a nice touch and good idea to refer to that style.

I often feel like I have nothing really great to say to an author, even if I've really liked what I've read. After noticing that many writers like to know if people are reading, I've increased commenting. I still don't do it every time...